Good story, It would be so nice to have a helpful sister like her to be with me and show me the ropes and be there for me!!!

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Can you tell me why?
Silvia.

Doesn't happen nothing with guilt parents? Why not?
Does only the child must suffer? Why?
Silvia.

MOM'S CONTEST GETS OUT OF HAND BECAUSE SHE CAN'T SEE ANYTHING BUT THE PRIZE. IT ALSO LETS HER SON FIND THAT HE WANTS TO BE A WOMAN. JANET, A DIFFERENT STROY IN THAT MOM WAS A DITZY DAME THAT ABUSED HER SON

  Well if you want to read a complete story and feel good this is it .   a complete and wonderful story that has all the feeling and emotion anyone could ask for and more ... this author has a skill that will pull you in and make you wonder how she did that ..
Super good and lovely story .... thank you thank you thank you

thank you   Rone :) *****

Classic Janet. Great as always. But then I'm always a sucker for "G" stories
with good descriptive dialog.  I love the first half of Janet's stories.  This
one had some good character development between Dad and our hero
but not much that seems to break down early. Maybe someday the hero
will still be a boy in the end?  Keep up the good work!

I have to agree with some of the others here.  For those with gay fantasies, these stories have got to be a lot of fun, but I'm kind of tired of every guy who's forcibly feminized suddenly wanting a boyfriend.  It's as non-credible as the transformation stories and frankly, not as much fun.  It'd be nice if you vary your endings, but you don't seem to be so inclined.

This story is standard Janet:  Thru circumstances, boy reluctantly dresses as girl, passing almost immediately; boy admits he likes being a girl after trials and tribulations, boy/girl finds he is attracted to boys.  Boy becomes girl permanently.  The stories are nice and I enjoy reading them.  

However this story, based so much on his desire to keep his male identity secret, lacked credibility right from the beginning when mom publicly signed him up as her son, using his male name.  No words of caution to keep this a secret were given.  This would be so unusual that the news would certainly get out and spread; tabloids would eat this story up.  

Other things:  1) Why didn't mom and dad tell the two about the $10,000 right at the start?  It would have saved Jeff several days of grief by giving him immediate motivation and explaining the motivation of his parents.  AND he wouldn't have to hide his identity:  "Hey it's a good shot at $10,000 bucks and it's only a couple of days.  You'd do it too."  I bet his friends would understand; money talks.  2) It is taken as a given that if Jeff is to be angela, "she" has to like boys.  Why?  Jeff might find it a lot easier accepting womanhood if he believed it was all right for Angela to be a lesbian.  

Sorry, Janet. I think you're a terrific writer but this is formula, formula, formula.  It would be nice to see you try a piece where the guy didn't end up turning essentially gay and waiting to be taken out by his boyfriend.  I know it's fantasy, but it's getting kind of old, I'm afraid.  I may be in the minority because a lot of people here enjoy it, but that's my opinion.

The only part I didn't like was how force the kid seemed to dress up for the party and stuff. Other than that I would it was well written as usual for your work.

Though I always enjoy the plotlines and the quality of writing just once I'd like the boy to enjoy dressing up without having to want to be one permanently and be attracted to boys.

as a ts myself ,i know what i went through ,so i really enjoyed reading this story.this story showed me that that you may just become a female like in this story ,but some times some thing happens and you want to become one permantly.Keep writing stories like this one.i enjoyed it alot