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Sisters
by Jennifer White

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Comment by Ron on 08/21/14
Hi, I just finished Sisters and wanted to let you know it was very well written and imaginative.  I enjoyed it very much.  I hope you are still writting

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Comment by Don Cassa on 08/12/12
Very enjoyable!  I agree that the 'X' rating is to strong though.

Comment by shelli on 12/04/10
Whats the matter...Didnt know how to end the story???
The whole last paragraph made no sense!!! Brain drained???
Otherwise, very good story.

Comment by leelee on 08/01/10
I love hypnotists stories and have always fantasized being made to dress and act fem  by way of hypnotic suggestion.  So this story was nice to read  And of course the possiblity that the father may harbor trans fantasies makes for a part two.  I thought X ratings were reserved for hard core sex stories   This was a sweet and devious little story about a girl who acting like a girl got herself a sister....My sister was never nice to me like that !!! Thanks for the story  I hope to read more of them

Comment by Lucy Locket on 08/02/09
I like the ‘sick’ story. Why not write a sequel (third part) where Linda does the same to his wife and her daughter to become male and the family will all be together again but in the opposite sex! Very clever story but a pity it is no realistic. At least for a change to other homosexual stories, where they are usually all perverted and much ‘sicker’, they would just all have the wrong chromosomes.

Comment by Jill on 02/15/09
You are a sick man, and a sadist too.
Disgust.

Comment by Matthew on 03/02/06
Seems to me that The StepDaughter Becky Got all that She wanted through Trickery ...But What of Jodi & Linda They Really Had no
Choice in the matter what about them?

Comment by Cassandra on 09/23/03
Jennifer:

I cried tears of joy when I came to the end of this truly lovely story. Thank you for taking the time to write the sequel. It was just wonderful!

Cassie

Comment by SassySue on 09/14/03
Another finely written story by Jennifer White! I enjyed it immensely.  The plot twist was ingenius.  I certainly wouldn't want to cross that big sister; a little too machlevielian for me.

I agree with others that this should not have been rated X, just because it mentioned but did not describe masturbation.  Rating this type of story R might actually increase readership and broaden your fan base.

Keep on writing your great stories.

SS

Comment by cassandra on 08/18/03
Jennifer:

This cute story really has a deliciously wicked hook to it! Will we see a sequel? I certainly hope so! Possibly John Sr. really always wanted to be female and now has the opportunity. I can hardly wait to see what develops!

Comment by vicky on 08/07/03
I usually love your stories, but I thought that this one was spectacular.  I just hope(please) that there is going to be a part two.  I'd love to see the dad changed, but kind of against his will, so he still remebers that he's still a guy.

Comment by Colleen on 08/02/03
Overall, I enjoy your writing style, Jennifer.  There are passages I envy - I wish I could write so cleanly.  But many of the stories, like this one, involve boys being coerced into dressing and becoming women.  Do you have any stories about boys that naturally want to be women?

Also, why was this one rated X?

Comment by Tanya Lynn on 08/02/03
Intuiging story, but I'm not sure if I like all that is going on.  I definitely want to see more.  

Comment by Briar on 08/02/03
The sting is in the tail !  
Nicely told story, which hung together well.  It was fun.



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