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Comment by Silvia. on 10/26/09
Evil, envious and frustrated sister, weak and full sister, weak and full husband. Comment by shelley on 01/22/08 i'm amazed at the fuss of embezzeling (sp?) 20,000 dollars.....even in a tight corset i wouldn't expect to catch my breath over a check for 2,000.. Comment by juliej on 09/27/06 a great story again my comments after this re read are excellent writing &well thought bit of a bitch for a sister in law but hay not a lot else you can do a nice bit of lying by sil he enjoyed it in the end Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 10/21/05 Another good one. I was forced into dresses, although not in the way Marty was, but like him, I came to love it. Tamara was a bitch, though; she didn't feminize him to help him, and she almost destroyed their marriage instead of helping it as she claimed. When she offered him womans' jewelry as a "peace offering," he should have refused them, not thanked her. It would have been interesting to take the story from the choice of whether to appaear as a complete woman or a man with makeup and do it from him choosing to stay as a man and deal with the problems he would encounter that way. Comment by janine! on 10/18/04 sisters in law...what a great theme....keep up the good work Comment by julie j on 09/28/04 I agree never trust your sisters in law what a way to treat marty but in the end he enjoyed it and wanted to keep on wearing the clothes an intresting compilation of things &another great story keep up the great work |
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