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Sister's Little Princess
by Shy

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Comment by "Missy," Susan Pauline on 12/17/14
Dear Miss Shy,

I read this story due to the suggestion at the begining of the Story of, "Sister," by Danielle Richards.

Un-like some of the other comments, I wish this would have happened to me! I had three sisters. More than once, to save the family some money,I suggested, that Mom & Dad send me to School, dressed in my Big Sister's hand-me-downs.

I so wanted to be girl-dressed all the time.

The only thing I didn't like about this story was, that, "She," wore boots, instead of Pink Court Shoes (Pumps), so everyone could see her fishnet stockings and pretty shoes.

You see, readers, not only am I a cross-dresser, I'm also a Sissy. Sissies love to get laughed at and made fun of. (You should never use a preposition to end a sentence with! (Tee-hee)

My Mistress/Wife is out, my chores are done, hence, I'm at the Computer (desk-top). Today was a day off from my day-job.

I would have just, "loved," to have been, "presented," as a Girl-Dressed-Boy rather than one who is, "passable." (Which I was; even at my Tiffany Club's, "First Event," and down in Greenwich Village.)

I would have been, "enchanted," walking to School dressed as a Girl. I don't think the Nuns would have liked it, though.

My big Sister had a walk-in closet. I so enjoyed the times, that I would be home, alone. More than once, after I had fallen asleep on my Sister's bed, in her clothes and high heels, I was woken up by either Mom or Dad, pulling my High Heels off. Time to get back into my boring boy-clothes. (sigh)

Again, I so enjoyed this story and wishing all the time it would have happened to me. My Mistress/Wife (47 years, plus) runs my life. I do what I'm told or expected to do.

Sisterly yours,
"Missy," Susan Pauline


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Comment by Abby on 01/17/11
Ahh The wonderment of having a warm loving caring older sister!
Man,that's a lot of glue!

Abby


Comment by Bruce on 05/09/09
for one sweater they scar his body for life, in reality they may wind up dead for this trick and no one would convict the kid for the murders...not a good story....and the mind that wrote has some issues to resolve

Comment by Vicki Stewart on 12/28/08
If that vindictive BITCH had been MY sister, I'd have cut her break pipes on her car and hoped she drive at full speed out of control into a concrete wall. Kind regards, Vicki. xxx

Comment by tony on 12/04/08
Good story. What happens next?

Comment by Yoron on 06/02/08
Humiliation by his own Sister?
And doing that, leaving him for all to see.
Not humans, something less, lower than animals.
To find pleasure in this.

Yoron


Comment by juliej on 03/01/08
asper pevious comments

Comment by juliej on 01/13/07
a brilliant story that needs to be finished with things like how he got home trhe reaction of parents how he got out of the clothes etc was he made to stay like a girl many things like that brilliant

Comment by Giselle Rene' on 03/13/05
Dear Shy,

Will ch 2 deal perhaps with the further feminization of the main character?

The girls could rescue him from the mall only to take him to a friend's beauty salon to dye his wig a different color.  Blonde, perhaps.  Pink is a bit too flamboyant.  Add 4" long acrylic nails, too!

Then, take him to a shop to have 42DD breastforms and a latex, vagina shaped gaffe applied, all with the infamous glue?

Then, to a corsetier to have a bullet cupped long line bra, girdle and waist cincher applied with the glue?

Then, have him glued into a woman's business suit and dropped off at the home of a rich, domineering businesswoman to start a new life as her personal secretary?

Just suggestions!

BTW, if the girls do all this to him they're going to need a 55 gallon drum of that glue!  Or, at least a few more tubes.  ;-)

Giselle Rene'

Comment by Jimmy on 02/13/05
Is this just a story about cruelty, for the sake of cruelty?  Why does the sister hate her brother so much that she would do these things to him?

BTW:  Can't you think of a better way to trap the brother in the dress than the built in panty?  It is just too far fetched.

Comment by julie j on 11/07/04
a lesson to be learnt by all the story was good the revenge of his sister was very wicked glue indeed what will the parents say when they return and find out what his sister had done once they got of everything of him it would be great if the punnishment was to be dressed as a girl for a long time to come the punishment to fit the crime

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Comment by Shy on 05/20/04
10,000 views??? Wow, thank you all!

Comment by BrianGirl on 04/14/04
I kept meaning to respond to this story awhile ago. It remains my favorite story on the board. I know its unrealistic but it makes it more intense to read. Its fun and has great pace. Thank you.

Comment by Yukiko Tsukashima on 01/11/03
I found this story a very good read.  I agree in pretty much with Jezzi Belle Stewart's comments with regards to realism and attitude of the main character, but I personally enjoyed this story even though the sister's response was perhaps unrealistic and over-the-top, and the main character wasn't proactive.  

When read as a fantasy, I found this story was very well written.  I think the sister's excessive response to the invasion of her room was one of the things that made the story so interesting.  Also, that the main character didn't know how to respond to the sister's behavior seemed a pretty realistic response to me.  The only emotion I wish the author would have explored is the main character's response to his sister's obvious despite for him (one doesn't act as viciously as the sister did without having a story behind the viciousness).  But even with that emotion (and the sister's deep hate) unexplored, the story was well worth reading.

Comment by Jennifer on 01/03/03
Loved it Shy, I could really feel the doomed feeling he must have had at the hands of such a bunch of girls. I particularly liked the idea of glueing the zipper of the dress shut! Would have liked them to find a convenient lamp post and superglue his hands behind him. Then he WOULD be in trouble! Keep up the good work.

Comment by Mary on 01/01/03
Wow is all I can say.

What an EVIL HEARTLESS BITCH his sister is. I wounder what his parents are like to raise such a monster. It would serve them right to lose both children. One to Child Welfare the other to pirson.

Comment by Shy on 01/01/03
You think the story isn't finished yet? Maybe that's 'cause there's more left to come...

Comment by Scrambler_J on 12/31/02
WIld story.   Man would I hate to have a sister like that!   One E-V-I-L bitch!   But now that they've had thier *fun* with him, will the reality of what they did to him sink in?   I sure as hell hope so.   A kicker to this would be that night draws closer and closer and her brother still hasn't come home.  Mom and Dad arrive and she will have to come up with an explantion.   Will it be that he is over at a friends house.  If so how will she explain him looking as he does come home in her clothes?   Or will the parents get a call from the police to come down the jail and pick up their son.   Perhaps worse yet is that the day passes and he doens't show up, then two, followed by three.   By now any excuss she makes will not work and question will be asked.   Where is your BROTHER!   Across town a very frighten boy in drag sits in a strange dark place wishing he had never gone into her room.

All those things and more could happen   One thing is sure that I agree with others due to what was done to him this poor boy will never be the same.   And is his parents are even half as heartless as his sister, then maybe they will get her face tattooed with clown make -up as punishment.

until the next time

-j-

Comment by Annie O on 12/31/02
Shy:
 I must say this, the story may be just that, but.
 I wonder what would happen in RL if this happened, and how the boy would feel to all girls in the future.
 A Molotov cocktail through the girls window? A 2x4 at the back of the legs? The brake line cut on a car?
 We write for reasons, some not too clear until we stop.
 Put yourself in the boy's place, and, except if you are an extreme masochistic type, see how you would act in the future.
 All I'm saying write what you love, love what you write.

Comment by Angel on 12/31/02
This girl really hates her brother! I mean HATE! What kind of family is this? How did they bring up this girl to be so evil!

1) By using glue, permanent marker and paint she has made her brother a ticking time bomb for a hospital stay!

2)By dropping him off at the local mall everyone is involved in this very cruel and even evil deed! This boy will no longer be able to live as a normal human being. His future is sealed by this event! Pictures and ridicule and humiliation!

How the hell is he suppossed to get home? The police will surely get involved! Then what? Yes, sister is in big legal trouble, but her brothers fate is still sealed. His parents? LOL...If they brought up a daughter to be this thoughtless and with no heart or soul toward a family member, what about them? Legal trouble for sure.

No this boy will never ever be the same! If I was him? I would be planning now on how to torture his sister to a very slow and very painful degredation! Just maybe, blind her forever, pop her eardrums so she can never hear again, then maybe cut off her thumbs and index fingers. Oh yes and remove her tongue. Then I figure they would be even! Then on to the girls that helped...
Angel

LOL...

What a mind! What a story! Humiliation, degredation, the ruination of a boys life. Hm....All in all, a very good read.

Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 12/31/02
I thought this was a realistic story except for the permanency of everything.  I could see the girls dressing him and even the glue along the zipper, but not in the hair (although on the edges of the wig, maybe) or on the feet and arms.  The paint could probably be removed, but the marker to the lips was too much.  I can see a parent going along with the dressing him up as punishment, but not the glue, paint, and permanent marker.  I would like to see sis (Is she Dana or Celeste?) get hers - maybe a matching dress hair and makeup till his all came off.

I'd also like him to start acting instead of reacting.  OK, so he's at the mall dressed as a drag queen prom parody.  Put on a show!  Act like he's doing a job that someone hired him to do.  Stop being a victim and start planning revenge.  OR, go to the police or DCFS and swear out a complaint against his sister.  Sure it would be humiliating, but he's already been humiliated and it's implied that he was recognized/read so what's he got to lose?  Freedom's just another word for nothing left to lose.  If he's gonna go down, take her with him!  Don't let the bitch win.

Comment by Peg Thebois on 12/31/02
Marvelous, I absolutely loved it, reminds of some of the stories I'm working on, One of which is in the cue to be posted on this site.  Maybe we could collaberate sometime.

Comment by Bobbi on 12/31/02
I really enjoyed the story but there seems to be more left to write.  How was the parents react?  What will happen to the boy now?  etc..?

Comment by Kelly Davidson on 12/31/02
Well, a very good story.  I loved the detail of him being dressed and what follows.  I thought there was a realistic story, in that it could've happened and it was very well written.  Great job, Shy.  Hope to read more of your works here.

Hugs -- Kelly Davidson



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