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Keep writing. Comment by trimskink on 05/30/13 you need to remake this as a youtube video lots of people would watch i know I would AMAZING 5/5 Comment by Abby on 01/17/11 Ahh The wonderment of having a warm loving caring older sister! Comment by Bruce on 05/09/09 for one sweater they scar his body for life, in reality they may wind up dead for this trick and no one would convict the kid for the murders...not a good story....and the mind that wrote has some issues to resolve Comment by Vicki Stewart on 12/28/08 If that vindictive BITCH had been MY sister, I'd have cut her break pipes on her car and hoped she drive at full speed out of control into a concrete wall. Kind regards, Vicki. xxx Comment by tony on 12/04/08 Good story. What happens next? Comment by Yoron on 06/02/08 Humiliation by his own Sister? Comment by juliej on 03/01/08 asper pevious comments Comment by juliej on 01/13/07 a brilliant story that needs to be finished with things like how he got home trhe reaction of parents how he got out of the clothes etc was he made to stay like a girl many things like that brilliant Comment by Giselle Rene' on 03/13/05 Dear Shy, Comment by Jimmy on 02/13/05 Is this just a story about cruelty, for the sake of cruelty? Why does the sister hate her brother so much that she would do these things to him? Comment by julie j on 11/07/04 a lesson to be learnt by all the story was good the revenge of his sister was very wicked glue indeed what will the parents say when they return and find out what his sister had done once they got of everything of him it would be great if the punnishment was to be dressed as a girl for a long time to come the punishment to fit the crime Comment by Sticky on 10/25/04 I have something to tell you about your storie, It's really good! One of my favorites. Please Shy if you can contact me to webmaster@sticky-site.com Comment by Shy on 05/20/04 10,000 views??? Wow, thank you all! Comment by BrianGirl on 04/14/04 I kept meaning to respond to this story awhile ago. It remains my favorite story on the board. I know its unrealistic but it makes it more intense to read. Its fun and has great pace. Thank you. Comment by Yukiko Tsukashima on 01/11/03 I found this story a very good read. I agree in pretty much with Jezzi Belle Stewart's comments with regards to realism and attitude of the main character, but I personally enjoyed this story even though the sister's response was perhaps unrealistic and over-the-top, and the main character wasn't proactive. Comment by Jennifer on 01/03/03 Loved it Shy, I could really feel the doomed feeling he must have had at the hands of such a bunch of girls. I particularly liked the idea of glueing the zipper of the dress shut! Would have liked them to find a convenient lamp post and superglue his hands behind him. Then he WOULD be in trouble! Keep up the good work. Comment by Mary on 01/01/03 Wow is all I can say. Comment by Shy on 01/01/03 You think the story isn't finished yet? Maybe that's 'cause there's more left to come... Comment by Scrambler_J on 12/31/02 WIld story. Man would I hate to have a sister like that! One E-V-I-L bitch! But now that they've had thier *fun* with him, will the reality of what they did to him sink in? I sure as hell hope so. A kicker to this would be that night draws closer and closer and her brother still hasn't come home. Mom and Dad arrive and she will have to come up with an explantion. Will it be that he is over at a friends house. If so how will she explain him looking as he does come home in her clothes? Or will the parents get a call from the police to come down the jail and pick up their son. Perhaps worse yet is that the day passes and he doens't show up, then two, followed by three. By now any excuss she makes will not work and question will be asked. Where is your BROTHER! Across town a very frighten boy in drag sits in a strange dark place wishing he had never gone into her room. Comment by Annie O on 12/31/02 Shy: Comment by Angel on 12/31/02 This girl really hates her brother! I mean HATE! What kind of family is this? How did they bring up this girl to be so evil! Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 12/31/02 I thought this was a realistic story except for the permanency of everything. I could see the girls dressing him and even the glue along the zipper, but not in the hair (although on the edges of the wig, maybe) or on the feet and arms. The paint could probably be removed, but the marker to the lips was too much. I can see a parent going along with the dressing him up as punishment, but not the glue, paint, and permanent marker. I would like to see sis (Is she Dana or Celeste?) get hers - maybe a matching dress hair and makeup till his all came off. Comment by Peg Thebois on 12/31/02 Marvelous, I absolutely loved it, reminds of some of the stories I'm working on, One of which is in the cue to be posted on this site. Maybe we could collaberate sometime. Comment by Bobbi on 12/31/02 I really enjoyed the story but there seems to be more left to write. How was the parents react? What will happen to the boy now? etc..? Comment by Kelly Davidson on 12/31/02 Well, a very good story. I loved the detail of him being dressed and what follows. I thought there was a realistic story, in that it could've happened and it was very well written. Great job, Shy. Hope to read more of your works here. |
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