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Skirting Disaster
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Comment by Aleesha on 10/18/10
Straight to the point, OK so far. Comment by Richard Hanson on 06/03/08 Well Elsa B. When are we going to see that next chapter of this adventure that you have left us hanging for almost Four years now? Richard Comment by Evonne on 07/31/04 Really enjoyed the story. Am really looking forward to the next chapter. Comment by Elsa.b on 04/18/04 Re sex scenes. Please bear with me on these as they are an integral part of the story in my mind. In life people DO indulge in 'GRATUITOUS SEX', just for fun. However in the story , they are an attempt at showing the nature of some of the characters and how they releive their tensions. In Elsa's case , they attempt to show the conflict between the male she was, and the female she is becoming. This is where my skills ,as an author,fall down perhaps.If that was not clear , then I apologise to my readers. Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 04/17/04 << As they hugged Elsa felt Allys' hands start to wander to her lower regions caressing her bottom gently. >> Comment by Francine on 04/16/04 Thank you Elsa for continuing the story. :) Comment by jim on 10/25/03 Skirting disaster Comment by Cassandra on 10/21/03 Dear, this is the start of what I believe will be a very nice story. I read with enjoyment the opening chapter and believe you have a nice style of telling a story. Unfortunately it seems, you took a turn to pursue another plot. The gratuitous lesbian love scene seems so wrong , unless you plan to tie it into the general theme of Elsa's transformation. I'll look forward to part 2 to see how you weave this unwelcome sidetrack into the story line. Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 10/19/03 I enjoyed this until you unexpectedly went off on what seems to be an entirely gratuitous lesbian sex scene. I will read part 2 as I'm assuming there is a reason for it that has to do with Eric's story and that it wasn't just a "Ohmygawd, I can't submit this without a sex scene" thought. Comment by Jane Hudson on 10/19/03 Great story loved it.A real nicely told story |
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