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Comment by crorkz on 08/04/14
MVyDuV Great, thanks for sharing this article post.Much thanks again. Want more. Comment by link building on 09/07/13 IqMxtJ Great article post. Really Great. Comment by Catherine Robertson on 10/31/09 I have read a fair amount of TG literature over the years and found your story to be not only very readable but, an interesting change to anything that I have read up to this point. Thank you very much for taking the time and energy to write it! Comment by juliej on 01/06/07 it was a vicous attack on babs that happened but the story was brilliant this shoulfd be motre to put in this a great story well worth continuing Comment by Briar on 11/09/06 Please forgive me for pointing this out, but S Tottenham is nowhere near Stamford and is not easily accessible from it. I mention this because, whilst local geography is good to have in a story, giving it believability, one has to get it right or the opposite effect happens. Comment by Glasgow hotels on 07/03/06 Glasgow hotels Comment by Lille hotels on 06/22/06 Lille hotels Comment by Bangkok hotels on 06/21/06 Bangkok hotels Comment by Sao Paulo hotels on 05/31/06 Sao Paulo hotels Comment by Budapest hotels on 05/31/06 Budapest hotels Comment by Cologne hotels on 05/30/06 Cologne hotels Comment by Brighton hotels on 05/30/06 Brighton hotels Comment by Cologne hotels on 05/30/06 Cologne hotels Comment by Beijing hotels on 05/29/06 Beijing hotels Comment by New Orleans hotels on 05/22/06 New Orleans hotels Comment by Cologne hotels on 05/20/06 Cologne hotels Comment by Charlotte hotels on 05/17/06 Charlotte hotels Comment by Dallas hotels on 05/16/06 Dallas hotels Comment by Albuquerque hotels on 05/12/06 Albuquerque hotels Comment by Beijing hotels on 05/12/06 Beijing hotels Comment by Budapest hotels on 04/29/06 Budapest hotels Comment by Katrina on 04/29/06 Very nice website with a lot of informative response from members Comment by Chicago hotels on 04/28/06 Chicago hotels Comment by Portland hotels on 04/28/06 Portland hotels Comment by Tokyo hotels on 04/28/06 Tokyo hotels Comment by Zurich hotels on 04/19/06 Zurich hotels Comment by Donna Dee on 11/01/04 I started off reading about TJ and co ages ago - or so it seems and I am delighted you have decided to carry on with it - It is good, but this story, The Small Ad, which I have read today in a single sitting is so close to being brilliant that I feel humbled to belong to a group of people who dedicate a large amount of time to entertaining others. Comment by Fran on 10/25/03 Hi ! Again Samantha :-) Comment by Elsa_b on 09/26/03 I have just finished reading 'The Small Add' and have to say that I enjoyed every minute of it. I must be honest and say that I am always apprehensive about SISSY stories as so many of them fall into a humiliation storyline. You , however, avoided that trap nicely ,and as a result produced an exceptionally enjoyable tale. Thank you for a great deal of enjoyment. Comment by Cassandra on 09/25/03 Thank you for a wonderful story. I really wanted to finish it prior to commenting. You have shown a special quality in your writing that I just loved. You really handled the many intriguing sub plots with much skill and dexterity. Comment by Cai on 09/24/03 An Additional commment, Samantha.....I have started "archiving" it for my pleasure at a later day....I have done that with very few authors......only the great ones. Comment by Cai on 09/24/03 Wonderful storyline, enjoyable characters, it flows very well...I am awaiting each episode anxiously.... Comment by maurice on 09/23/03 good story, Comment by Jenny on 09/22/03 A great story, I can almost 'taste'it! How long before part 3? Comment by Rose on 09/21/03 Great story, with an interesting start. Looking forward to part 3. Comment by Chris on 09/20/03 Absolutely intriguing story. Lots of threads in the personalities and in the plot. I know Cockfosters and South Tottenham well. Are we seven sisters road or broad lane? Cockfosters is exactly the place anyone would seek to escape from as soon as they worked up the courage to want to experience life. And, to travel from Cockfosters road to end up being wined and dined in Ongar, well - what surprises does life hold. Comment by Angel O'Hare on 09/20/03 Well, a real different start for a TG story I must say. Very interesting begining, but I see no intro to any TG element other than the boys size. So far everything has been straight, but maybe the lady of the house is not in reality a lady? Giggle, giggle. Comment by julie on 09/20/03 an interesting start to the story I guess the trap has been set and will close in due course,i mean rent free and all the benifits for just house sittings its to good to be true something will happen soon I will be most disapointed if it doesnot a good start to a great story how long please before the next installment and iwonder what is in store for us then |
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