Cindy Catron - Gina and Tom, Absolutely beautiful wdenidg pictures!!  We are so glad that your Grandma and Grandpa Catron were able to make the trip with Roger and Mary! Wish we could have been there! Love Aunt Cindy and Uncle Mike

I agree with all the other comments on this story. This is very well written, with the right sense of the mix of feelings on the part of the "sissy hubbette", part excitement and part deep embarassment and humiliation. The Mistress is also an excellent blend of the loving and the firm. Really look forward to a further part on the cruise ship, with Monica sent out to sunbathe in her swimsuit - a bikini, perhaps?

A truly wonderful story, very well written.  But why submitted so long ago with no follow ups?  Hope you personally are OK.  If you are, allow me to join with the others to encourage you to go further with this.  
                                      Love and hugs,
                                      Lorrielle  

I think Smooth Sailing is Melody's best yet, and look forward to future installments.  Right up there with the writings from A Happy Wife!

I particularly like the scene setting, where Gina explains to "Monica" exactly how it is -- the paragraph starting "Put up some sort of fight, to show that you are still a man, honey?"  And again, when they're on the shuttle bus and one of the other ladies says "I just love what you've done with him..."  I'm driven to imagine exactly what those scenes would look like, and mentally to replay them over and over.

Extremely well written, and captures the essence of sissy anticipation and arousal.  I can't wait to read future installments, such as when mother-in-law comes to visit, or when Gina takes Monica lingerie shopping, has her hold up a particularly pretty garter belt in front of her slacks (and in front of other ladies) because "it's going to look so cute on you"...  or maybe Monica has to raise her skirt because Gina decides "Show the nice lady your pretty panties, dear.  ... Oh my, are you tenting in your panties, again sweetie?"

If there is a single thing I'd change it's the engineering that makes Monica's erections painful.  Surely with what she faces she is aroused most all the time, isn't she?  

Better perhaps that she's embarrassed and/or aroused all the time, but that she knows she can't masturbate without risking Gina's punishment.  And as for that -- how any dominant woman very effectively controls a submissive male's desire to masturbate, and how Gina might choose to control Monica in the future -- I'd highly recommend reading Sexual Power for Women at www.francescaspizza.com

Please keep up the good work!

Rob

Loved it! Tension high with the delicious mix of anticipation (especially the reader's), reluctance, acceptance, & loving testing & teasing. :)

Enjoyed it very much  !!!

Can't wait for more  :-)

Melody:

   Not usually my genre but I really enjoyed part one of Smooth Sailing. Hope you post all of the story in time. The fact that this is willing, as far as I can tell, makes it cute and somewhat thrilling. Also she does obviously really love her sissy.

  Your tale is well constructed and captures many of the emotions and almost all the inner dialog of the sissy. I think that is what makes it so fun. I will be looking for more.

   Hugs,

   Kristi