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Snip!
by Vickie Tern

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Comment by Gary on 06/27/11
I never tire of reading this story and I want to say thank you for composing it! It would be SUCH a turn on if you could add to it and describe in the same delicious detail, the evolution of the main character from new eunuch to "the boys'" pet and lover and Aurora's girl friend - the physical, emotional and mental changes and needs of the newly formed she male. I really like this story a lot - it is definitely one of my all time favorites and I have been reading it off and on for the last ten years or so - always looking for and hoping for a continuation of it. Please consider another chapter or a few - I am pretty sure that I am not the first to make such a request. I enjoy ALL of your writings but nothing else captivates me like Snip. I am a married guy with strong bi leanings that go unsatisfied due to loving my wife too much to cheat on her but your writing helps me to satisfy my need for good bi fantasy subjects. Thank you again and again, PLEASE continue this story - it has tons of potential as the hero begins his journey in his new life towards..??? Well, I'll let you decide and tell it if you willl be so kind as to do so. I envision AUrora returning from a business trip several lweeks after the story ended to find your main character laying by the pool, his budding breasts caressed by the warm summer sun as Charles fucks his man pussy and the other two guys enjoy his hands and mouth as he lays there with his now pathetic, now forever useless little dick soft but oozing juices out of it across his now shaved and hairless belly and groin. Perhaps Aurora would have some business clients withhim - maybe a bi sexual couple perhaps, who have a taste for girls that once were men and studs who can fuck for hours but not impregnate..

Comment by Roland on 06/23/09
Quite a snippette!



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