Well this is a sweet and enjoyable story...some times a story like this is welcome from the grind of life ... oh to be young again ..
thank you for sharing .......
 Rone

Lovely, hauntingly lovely, and exquisitely well-conceived and well-written.  I had to read it twice because I didn't want to let it go, emotionally real, essentially quite credible, and with unmistakable style.  You showed marvelous restraint in resisting the obvious and making the story far sexier than most by filling our senses of the promise and desires for lovemaking but pulling short of the leap.  Please so not be persuaded by some who thought this too slow -- the pacing and atmosphere fit the story and characters perfectly, just like good ski gloves.  You obviously have a true gift for literature.  I urge you to continue to follow your pwn personal muse.

Love & Kisses,
Sheryl S.

Just loved the story my dear .

Excellent Writing and talking Style. It begs for a sequel. I love the sex tease and awakening parts but you stopped short too soon.  If Laurie was that irressistable then I don't understand why Chuck stopped seducing her want to and finishing her TG transformation into a Tgirl. To be a true TG story do a sequel to phase Lawrences transition into Laurie and more graphic expainations please.
ReginaG

I am generally not into the male+male stories, but this one caught me with it's excellent writing and pacing. The emotions and dialog were well done and ketp me interested through bits i normally would only skim. Well done!

A complex story, with characterization & motivation not at all
obvious. I liked the way the two characters interacted, & I LOVED
the way their time together turned out. The whole story is subtle
& not what one would expect. A wonderful, professional piece of work.

--Pervy

This was the first of your stories I read at Fictionmania. I liked your style so read the rest of them.

Keep on writing.

-Josea

I have read a very similar story somewhere awhile back. This reads a little different than that one I think, but similar is ok as long as it isn't a copy. That is if you are not the original writer of that piece from awhile ago. I will look for it and post the link here when I do find it.

Huggles
Angel