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So-Called Friend
by Jennifer Allison

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Comment by Anonymous on 03/05/10
Great story line. Gave me the creeps, but the end made it worth reading in its entirety. The fact that the plot came back to bite the step-mom in the A## was the icing on the cake. It's too bad this same type of justice can't be utilized - in reality - on some of our corporate or government leaders, or those positioning themself on a pedastal.

Comment by Helena on 07/31/09
A really great story.  Shame it is fiction and a shame that there are not any schools like that in England, as I would loved to have attended one!

Comment by Dianna on 03/24/08
To be honest, after reading some of your stories, I was rather surprised that the main character's got justice. Pleasantly surprised, but surprised none-the-less.

Comment by Charlie on 04/08/03
A stimulating read, but the 'justice' is a little perverted

Comment by steve on 12/03/01
a little drawn out more interaction between the step-mom

Comment by Trebor54 on 10/22/01
  A screwed up comedy of perverse thinking. The one's that should have been punished (except one) got away with murder. In my book all the women mentioned should've contracted a debilitating disease.

Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 10/04/01
Dean has some nerve being mad at John.  He has just become Billy's "so called friend", just as bad as John.  He's quite willing to sacrifice his best friend so the HS team can have a winning season. He says Billy will end up at his school anyway, but he could have warned Billy and given him a chance to get away.  I just lost all sympathy for the main character.

Comment by Trebor54 on 10/01/01
  Looks like I'm right. That so called friend and step-mother put him in a school from hell. I hope somebody finds out what they do. Then takes care of all those dyke's and his so-calledfriend and step-mother.

Comment by Dawn on 09/29/01
Great story so far, I will be waiting to read more. Thank's

Comment by Trebor54 on 09/19/01
 I'd do my damned best to get even with my so-called friend and my fucked up step-mother. But you won't let him do it will you.



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