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Society Wedding
by Alice Barry

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Comment by RoyalCBD.com on 03/02/21
XZgx7d Way cool! Some very valid points! I appreciate you penning this article plus the rest of the site is extremely good.
Comment by suba suba on 11/07/19
rxbOgh Money and freedom is the best way to change, may
Comment by online business on 09/13/13
8oyEAk Im thankful for the post.Much thanks again. Want more.
Comment by link building on 09/06/13
VIbWT7 Fantastic post.Really thank you! Will read on...
Comment by Silvia. on 07/15/10
Hi Alice.
I loved your story.
You're a good writer and did a great job.
Keep writing.
Kisses.
Silvia.
Comment by Tommi on 11/29/08
Alice
I love the story and like the direction you have taken and hope
you will add on at some point.
Huggs
Tommi
Comment by Debbie on 10/24/08
Great stories, I just finished reading them and enjoyed them completely. Confident, upbeat, and sexy! Alice, I'm really looking forward to reading more of your work.
Comment by Alice Barry on 09/10/08
Hi,

This is Alice. I wrote this story more than 4 years ago. I'm glad everyone has liked it. As I read back through it, I didn't like the sentence structure; I think it reads like some of the computer manuals I've written.

So, at my earliest opportunity, it will get fixed; just don't know when that will be.

Alice

Comment by Vivien Tena Britton on 08/11/07
Excellent!  Just excellent!  
Comment by Gwen on 06/25/06
Wow!  Loved it!  Alice is my kinda girl!  Hope #2 is as good.  Thanks.
Comment by Yvette on 04/26/06
Agood quite believable story. Keep writing
Comment by Oweena Scott on 03/19/05
Society Wedding

Alice:

I don’t have gynecomastia but I do have the next best thing.  I have been on hormones for the past few years and my breasts have grown to 40 C.

Now about the story of Alice and Jeff.  I have an idea how they might achieve their goal in having children.  E-mail me as I don’t want to revile the plot because you might not agree with me.

I found the story to be very believable and would like to see much more of it.

Oweena
Comment by Alice Barry on 11/16/04
Yes, I have gynecomastia and boobs of my own. Sometimes they are a real nuisance and other times really cool. I can't remember which came first, the boobs or the CD.

P.S. More stories coming soon. Putting finishing touches on.
Comment by Barbara Winslow on 11/11/04
Alice, I enjoyed your story; the gynecomastia angle is novel, and the writing is crisp and readable.  And of all things-- it's proofread!  A rare commodity on the web.  We all want to know if you have boobs of your own, hon.  Thanks, Barbara.
Comment by Annabel on 06/25/04
Briliant story, beautifully written, excellent caharacterization.
If this the first story you've written, bravo!  More please!


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