Horrible, bad and disgusting story.
Silvia.

i like the tale but whish you would finish the next chapter soon thank you

How utterly disturbing. However this tale is well told, but every step of the way I got incensed a little more  All females are portrayed as self-indulgent egotistic lewd manipulative bitches.
The males are obtuse pussy whipped yellow striped buttheads.

And _still_ this story captures you. Lures you into sympathy and empathy with the protagonists' ill fate and you hope for a turn for the better. A slip of mommy 'dearest' were she's exposed as the source of his male development deficit.
A parent who snaps to attention and responsibility. Someone to confide in, get support from. If that must be Jezzi Bell Stewart (?) for pete's sake.. If must be, but do it, give that poor child something to cling on to for sanity.

See! You captured me. Now write some more chapters for this book.

btw I shed bitter tears with 'A Great Disguise' it was right on target. Though the majority -in the story- didn't (want) to pick up on its' meaning. So very very sad. I seem to remember a performance some time ago by a rock- or popgroup but I can't which. Not by Pam Tillis or Martina McBride. ( Ring any bells? )

Regards,
Jo-Anne

Angel, I feel for poor Rachel. Being turned into a girl because of his mothers greed will backfire. I hope that dad will finally end her reign of terror. Angel, I hope that you continue this story.

Angel this is good, i really feel sorry for Rich, again i can't want to see the last three chapters.  You have used the name Rachel Ann in this, alone with Melissa it's one of my favorite names and have used it in some of my storys which are not as good as yours.  

Love
Ladycat

Angel, you are a truely gifted writer. I simply can't get enough.

I have to be honest though concerning several unfinished stories some dating back to 2003. I simply must know how everything turns out not only in this story but also "Harvest Moon". Please, Please, Please tell me how everything turns out.  

Hi Angel  :-)

Yes, you have a winner of a story here.

Hugs,Fran

Thank You Dawna and Sharlee.

You have made my day, and I will try and get my next chapter written and edited as soon as I can. I am writing several other stories as well. You can find them at The Big Closet and another at Sapphire's Place. Both are exclusives to those sites. As always the rest of my writings will be submitted here. Giggle, giggle.

Huggles
Angel

WOW!!  A fantastic continuation to a wonderful story.  Good things are worth waiting for and this is not only good it is GREAT - well worth the wait.  You have tremendous writing ability - your characters are so fully developed.  Very erotic - sensual descriptions of the wide variety of sexual arousal - just great - can't wait for the next installment.  Congratulations

Angel, my dear, you deserve a VERY WELL DONE!!!, as usual.  Please do not keep us waiting toooooo long (giggle) for the next part(s).  Truly love your work--Sharlee