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Something Ventured
by Hebe Dotson

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Comment by Angie on 05/22/15
Thanks for such a fun read.  I especially enjoyed two things: 1) no kinky sexual stuff.  Crossdressers generally are straight and lead a normal, decent life.  Your story respected that.  2) I liked you throwing in Chrissie's father being a CD, but a very subtle one.  This truly was a feel-good story.  Thanks!

Comment by Smita Lanjekar on 03/24/13
Dear Hebe, A wonderful story. I appreciate it more because it relates to crossdressing only. I am an heterosexual crossdresser. I was impressed that you have described Chrissie,s journey without any sexual obscenities.I would love to read more from you, which would be devoid of any deviated sex behaviour.

Comment by brandy williams on 11/27/08
your storie was enjoyable from start to finish|
I would have liked a little more on the beauty shop and
the girls

Comment by Kristi Fitzpatrick on 01/16/07
   Excellent job Hebe. Most of all quite realistic and funny. Liked the parental interaction almost as much as Chrissie's journey. This story is concise and eminently entertaining. No changes needed. Love it!

   Hugs,

   Kristi


Comment by ANOTHER BRIAN on 03/15/03
THANKS AGAIN YOUR STORIES STAND ALONE WELL, BUT ALWAYS SEEM TO ENCOURAGE ANOTHER CHAPTER OR STORY. I GUESS THIS MEANS THAT YOU CENTRAL CHARACTERS ARE BELIEVABLE AS WELL AS ENDEARING. WHENEVER I SEE YOUR NAME AS THE AUTHOR OF A NEW STORY I GET A SMILE. SORRY FOR NOT THANKING YOU SOONER.
ANOTHER BRIAN

Comment by ANOTHER BRIAN on 03/15/03
THANKS AGAIN YOUR STORIES STAND ALONE WELL, BUT ALWAYS SEEM TO ENCOURAGE ANOTHER CHAPTER OR STORY. I GUESS THIS MEANS THAT YOU CENTRAL CHARACTERS ARE BELIVABLE AS WELL AS ENDEARING. WHENEVER I SEE YOUR NAME AS THE AUTHOR OF A NEW STORY I GET A SMILE. SORRY FOR NOT THANKING YOU SOONER.
ANOTHER BRIAN

Comment by Pervette on 11/14/02
Sure did love this story! I think it's hard to realize a cross-
dressing father; they tend to look slightly ridiculous.  But yours
didn't, & that's a real achievement.  (BTW, I have a draft of a
story in which the father does the same business with the picture
album.  I think I've seen this before; it's a good device.)  One
small complaint: a dance belt doesn't work like a gaff.  When you
see those dancers with the big bulges in the front of their tights,
that's what the dance belt does.  Sure, you can fake it, after a
fashion, if you don't have to contend with too big an endowment,
but it's not a good solution.  Take it from someone who's worn
dance belts for some years now.  Okay, okay...enough of that; it's
a lovely story, well told. How Chris will conceal his sex in the
years to come is a good question, but I was enjoying the story too
much to worry about that.

Pervy

Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 11/14/02
A nice, sweet story where everything happens the way we'd like it to, and I love happy endings!  BUT this isn't the end but the beginning, and I think the fact that Chrissie hasn't told Janet about "his" situation will eventually come back to haunt him or her, whichever is decided.  The town's too small, and too many people know; Chrissie certainly will be in the public eye, and all it would take would be one average tabloid reporter.  The best way to have handled this, I think, would have been to come clean to Janet right from the start.



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