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Sometimes You Get Lucky
by Jackie Simms

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Comment by Royal CBD on 03/02/21
RSEndf I value the article.Much thanks again. Keep writing.
Comment by see pron on 04/19/19
EJl2HA I truly appreciate this article.Thanks Again. Keep writing.
Comment by suba suba on 04/15/19
APg03C Your writing taste has been amazed me. Thanks, quite great post.
Comment by best pron on 12/19/18
Tdhjww Thanks-a-mundo for the post.Really looking forward to read more. Really Cool.
Comment by crorkz on 08/04/14
AX0lr8 Very neat post.Much thanks again. Fantastic.
Comment by Silvia. on 12/02/08
Hi.
Please, continue this story, because it's lovely.
Silvia.
Comment by RagDoll on 02/03/08
A nice story even if it seemed a bit hurried towards the end.
However, please get your timezones right.
Paris is 6 hrs ahead of the East Coast USA. So 7pm EST is already 1am Paris time. Even Concorde could not have made the trans Atlantic trip in zero minutes.
Please give us much more detail of the clothes that were purchased and the experiences she had trying them on. Every girl knows how fantastic that is.
 
Comment by Vicky on 12/03/07
I agree wth Gwen. Please continue to keep our heroine on the path that she is on. We all love a great love story. Keep up the great work!

Love, Vicky

Comment by Sheernightie on 11/25/07
Hi Jackie,
This too good to be left standing alone. Please continue. You are the writer so you write what you must. Personally I would continue in the same theme. The more lingerie, negligees, and gowns the better. I hope S&M, B/D, and other painful and humiliating themes are left out.
Thanks for a great start and best wishes.
Gwen
Comment by Rose on 11/25/07
Hi Jackie,
      What a great story and one that many of us would like to happen to ourselves. Please continue with this story and I look forward to the next part.

Luv Rose.



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