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RIDICULOUS, DISGUSTING,SICKLY...

Each of these sorority sisters has the makings of perfect dominatrix. Rachel and Daphne are certainly in for a very difficult initiation. Too bad further revalations were not forthcoming. Perhaps the two hapless pladges have been kept so busy cleaning bathrooms with toothbrushes and the like, and getting paddled for even the slightest of miscues that there hasn't been time to relate futher sufferings.
All in all, a wonderful tale of forced feminization and humiliation.

Very good story!! Even though I am 47, I would LOVE to be in Rachel's place! More, please!!

Rick...i think your story is yummy....but you left me hangin. You are either a girl or you have close connections to "greek life". Keep it coming, I need to know what happens to Goat Rachel....

a brilliant story sofar it would be amazing how much is true as i have herard a lot about the soreitys in the usa they get away with anything what a way to go moreplease

please don't keep me hanging, i need more. My Mistress really enjoys your story (she was a tri-delt in college) and has decided to turn me into her own personal pledge. I didn't know that cornflakes in your bra could hurt so much....best of luck to goat rachel as she starts her official pledge period!

A really good story. I liked it particularly because it didn't go over the edge; I would love to read more so please let's have more chapters in the same style. Very well done.

a great start to what looks like is going to be a great story please do the next parts as soonas possible i love the way it is written and how its worked out well done

A truely wonderful story, delicious humiliation. More please

Normally I don't like the humiliation type stories, esp. when they involve sex between the poor humiliated man and another man.  So far, anyway, this one doesn't, and it is amusingly written.  Now, a little sex between the humiliated pledge Rachel and the sorority girls would be interesting.

Really enjoying this, iniation always a turn on for me as well

Enjoyed part 3. Please keep it going.  Dick Dunham

Absoluted a wet story. I can't wait for part 4.I think the sisters are going to have lots of fun pledging these 2 goats. Perhaps a little 69 is in store for tem since they like boy cum so much. I'm sure the sisters will reward whichever goat that lasts the longest.i'd like to see more paddling and french maid initiating also. A goat wannabe, Sissi Riki

I enjoyed your story, please don't stop now.

Loved your story hon! I would gladly have traded place with Rick Goat. The humiliation would be heavonly! Hope to see more installments!

What a delicious story hon! I savored every word. I would gladly have been humiliated in such a way. Hope to see some sequels!

Dear Rick-
 Asa sister of tr-delt,I loveyour story. Don't keep me waiting for part 3!!!!!

Great so far Rachel! Hope you continue this one. Need any help? Send me an email and I'd be glad to assist. Priscilla.

Technically, it could use a bit of a proof just to catch those pesky ytops.

The situation was delightful, although how long Rachel can keep her new status hidden from Dad remains a problem.

Still, the situation is delicious as the evil step-sister, well not too evil, gets the ultimate upper hand over pesky little brother.

Of course Rachel must be taught to pass muster, to be the perfect image of a sweet sorority girl, with regular sets, perfectly laced into underthings, white gloves, lavender, and lace as she demurely receives suitors before attending the Fall Ball.

Sororities are such a learning experience, and who better to teach her the facts of life and her place in it than a Big Sister?

May you have fun as Rachel turns from a Goat into a lamb.
Sydney

What a wonderful beginning!  I can't wait to read more!

Please continue this story at your convienance (sp?).
Thanks

not bad for a first attempt.  I hope though that you can come up with a good detailed pledge initiation, and not the same paddling and raw food stereotypical trite.  Perhaps the pledges will be made to wear their bras on the outside of their clothing for a day, or dress as little toddlers, complete with large lollipops and their hair tied with ribbons in bunches.  I'm sure you can come up with something unique.
                           Best wishes,
                           Julie