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Sorority Slaves
by DJ711

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Comment by Royal CBD on 03/02/21
eMZpBu I really liked your article.Really thank you! Great.

Comment by on 02/22/21
K2odLR Pretty! This was an extremely wonderful article. Thank you for providing this info.

Comment by thruholewizard on 09/20/14
good story but under developed , needed more description of the change into a girl . The death of the girls was unrealistic and  not needed ,the rape by the frat guys was too vague

Dont get me wrong I liked the story and hope you write more ..


Comment by awesome site on 11/20/13
xjx1Z1 Wow, great article post.Really looking forward to read more. Will read on...

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Comment by juliej on 07/27/10
good story but 2 short

Comment by Regina on 03/15/09
Thanks for the great story I too wish I was in Jackies high heels. I hope you write more when you are ready.  Sorry to hear about your friend that will never be able to live a normal life now. I must tell you that actually sounds wonderful to me but it can't be done against someones will.  It would be my will completely, please share more about it if you would like.  Thanks again

Comment by Chelsea on 04/17/08
I read your above comment, and my heart goes out to you. I sent you an email and I hope it helps if even a little. Some people think they have a right to toy with other people's lives, but they will learn when they get their comeuppance ><

Comment by juliej on 03/20/08
good story  very fast paced worth reading again

Comment by jeannette on 12/20/07
Very cute story! Short, but cute. I wish that I was in "Jackie's" shoes...err... Heels!

Comment by Patricia Gold on 12/07/07
You are a gifted writer and I enjoyed your part 1 and part 2. Please continue to write you have a gift.



Comment by DJ on 11/19/07
Thanks for the comments.

Comment by juliej on 11/18/07
itst intresting story but very fast paced it would be better if it was slowed down a bit but it was a god story overall

Comment by Jayne on 11/17/07
A good premise, but reads in a very jerky and uncoordinated way. A good editor would really improve this story. Also, try to flesh it out somewhat. Parts of the story were good, but other parts were passed over far too quickly.

Comment by L on 11/15/07
Ended to quickly

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