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So Secure
by Jennifer White

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Comment by thisisme on 03/08/13
She won't get hers because the story is just that a fantasm. I find very often when reading these stories that I must disconnect myself rather than relate myself to the main character or I will never feel satisfaction after reading these stories. They never end; they just cut off before resolution. It is incredible how that in these stories the woman gets a complete pass while being unreasonably dastardly while men are lambasted for being crums but that nature never comes through the male characters of the story. Every so often I run into a story that is actually satisfying. Even most completed stories in this gendre are actully not finished.

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Comment by Cork on 04/14/08
Oh, Jesus Christ!  For looking at porn?  On his free time?  Get a better premise.  Either you are a complete idiot, or you expect that your reader is.

What was probably a good story was made entirely unreadable by a mind-numbingly stupid half-page of premise.  Seriously, I want to read the rest of the story, but I *just* *can't* bring myself to do it.

I think this story would have probably been better served if you'd just had Tara say "do what I say, or else" and work from there, with no more explanation.  Hell, I think I'll copy/paste your story into a Word file, delete everything up to the second set of asterisks, type in "Tara said 'do what I say, or else,'" and wait a week so I can forget the god-awful intro you wrote.  Then maybe I'll be able to read what is most likely a fine fem-dom story.

Imagine ordering a steak dinner at a fine restaurant, but first getting a soup appetizer that made you vomit.  You wouldn't want to eat your steak now, would you?

Consider this my vomit.


Comment by Linda Marie Daniels on 04/13/08
I loved this story.  The pacing was excellent as Russ gradually has to submit to his fate.  

I don't understand "Disappointed" comments.  Yes, this story does follow a familar pattern, but the thing that makes Jennifer's stories so good are that she takes these familiar patterns and always comes up with little twists and turns.  The art is in the descriptions and details.  

It's always a treat to see a new story by Jennifer here.  


Comment by Chelsea on 04/13/08
Yay another sick sadistic witch who says they have to do something absolutely terrible, they do it and they don't keep their promise. She will get hers, oh yes she will, she will dine in hell for all eternity as she deserves that witch. She promised if he did those things he did she'd change him back, she's a lying sadistic witch. I hope she dies the most horrible death you can possibly imagine, either that or get turned into a man, yes that would be most fitting for that wicked woman.

Comment by Disappointed on 04/12/08
Very, very lame.  Being prolific obviously does not guarantee consistency or quality. It's like a few hundred stories here or at FM.



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