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A Special Anniversry
by Michelle Rose

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Comment by Pippa K. on 09/16/04
I hate spell-checking utilities, especially ones that don't check syntax, and especially when used by people who can't spell.  "Herd" is a word, but unless it's stampeding, it might not be "heard".  And a "suit" may be sweet, but it's never a "suite," unless maybe you take a VERY big size.  Now, there is a French phrase which sounds a bit like "to suite," but that's not what you meant, either.  But enough of trivialities.  I'm intrigued.  Who, exactly, other than perhaps an orangutan, would grow their TOEnails long as a feminine fashion statement?  Neither yours truly nor any other girl in the big city would be caught dead with her toenails curling over the end of her jeweled strappy sandals!  Here, short (nails, not heels) IS sweet, even if not "suite."  I love you my sweet, but really, you need to get yourself a secretary!  Kisses!

Comment by TinaCortina on 09/16/04
I always wanted to be a proof-reader, so tend to be put-off my the odd spellos;  but otherwise a delightful introduction building nicely one hopes to a new series.
Love Tina xx



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