a great twist in this story martin thinks it was only temp what a way to go all that control he lost and is happier for it the slave part was a bit soft i would have liked for him to have retuened to his room and found not just material contents changed but also things like bars on the window a more secure lock on the door an a bit of bondage ad ministerded by joyce teaching him a lesson before the transformation another great story thankyou

Jennifer, What a wonderful fantasy! Yu've created a spacious reality in which to dream. I simply loved the psychological/personality angle it adds an inspiring dimension to a degree that few stories of this genre attain. Thank-you, and at the risk of sounding greedy, please write more!
gina

Loved it, loved it, loved it.  It was so close to the way I experienced my transformation, a little bit here, a little bit there.  My story goes on and on and on.  That's like breasts, they take a long time to develop even with the pills and creams.  I am small enough that the bulge was never a problem and they must have given me something in my water that kept me from getting aroused.  I always thought there was a market for the artificial pussy, I called it Kitty II, a vinyl facsimile to be applied with a tenacious adhesive but like I said, I could ramble on forever.  Love your story but I said that already.

Jeniffer you forgot Merder as a key word because thats what Joyce did do to Martin.