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The Special Neighbour
by Belinda Bee

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Comment by Berta on 07/06/15
Belinda,

You posted this 9/11/2004 as "Part 1." Now almost 11 years later we are still waiting for the "rest of the story!" Will we ever see the remaining "Parts"?

This was definitely somewhat of a turn about story for this reader. Almost every other scenario like you wrote about and that I've read has the action happening just the opposite of what went on in "Part 1". Usually it's the TG, TS or CDer that gets penetrated in most stories I've read. I did enjoy this short story and hope you're still around to provide us with more. I'm looking forward to that time.


Comment by Ernie on 03/13/13
Hi B.B are you still out there? Of so please let us know. Ernie.

Comment by Ernie on 01/29/13
B.B. why have stop. I am hooked. Please More. Ernie

Comment by Silvia. on 11/04/10
Not good, not bad!

Comment by john on 08/21/07
I love your story. it was just what i was looking for. to the point, reminds me of my experience in 85.

Comment by juliej on 04/07/06
short so far but worth continuing

Comment by juliej on 04/07/06
more please

Comment by juliej on 04/07/06
thankyou for this story it has an interesting compilation and it shoud be continued there is a lot more you could add to this

Comment by juliej on 04/07/06
this is a story well worth continuing its an interesting start something different lets see what else you can do with it thankyou

Comment by juliej on 04/07/06
i think this is a story well worth continuing its an interesting start

Comment by Elizabeth Susan on 10/11/05
Please do continue the story. I like it when the story makes things happen as though it was inevitable.  I think that if I were to live next door to a special girl I would never stray out of my apartment building.

Comment by Joanne on 09/13/04
Dear Belinda,

This is a lovely story and I would certainly appreciate you continuing.  I await quite anxiously for more parts.

Sincerely

Joanne

Comment by Carolyn Renee on 09/13/04
Lovely story -- please continue to the final 'climax'! Love & kisses  Carolyn Renee

Comment by Danielle on 09/13/04
Outstanding start.  Waiting in great aticipation for the next chapter.
Thsnks.

Comment by tanyalynn on 09/12/04
great start- i certainly hope it is to be continued.

Comment by Ahimsa on 09/12/04
Wonderful story, I often dream of a special girl living next door

Comment by Bob on 09/12/04
Absolutely great,well paced. Were I ever to find myself in a similar situation I'd want it to be just like that. I can hardly wait for the next installment. In other words, keep up the good work.



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