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Spend the Day With Josie
by Josie Girlc

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Comment by Mimosa on 12/13/11
Thanks for spending time on the computer (writing) so otrehs don't have to.

Comment by Minos Korva on 01/06/04
I'm impressed.  Wonder how one pulls that off?  And Jane, I'd love to see another story like that boss-becomes-secretary piece you did called "New Life." I loved it.

Comment by Jane Hudson on 01/06/04
My dear great story love it. By the way dear Minos I have done myself part time jobs as Jane and all they want is for you to do the job .A low wage job  empolyers  are not fussy as  long as you have breath in you .Waitress barmaid  Cleaner I have done these jobs. So it can be done .Mind you I live in England so maybe it differnt to the US.

Comment by Sheryl S. on 01/06/04
I continue to enjoy this series of chuckles and quick reads.  But, one question: why did Sabina suddenly decide you should be Bambi instead of Josie?  

I await your answer.  Thanks.

Love & Huggles,
Sheryl S.

Comment by Josie on 01/06/04
I have had jobs in several stores and you don't have to have a physical for employment in my state. I have a driver's license and a birth certificate that states female.

Comment by Minos Korva on 01/06/04
One question: if you have gotten jobs as a female, REALLY held those jobs down, isn't there a little matter of something called a PHYSICAL?  How does Josie get through THAT without raising eyebrows.  I mean, one can only suspend disbelief so much.



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