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Spoiled Rotten by Mommy
by Chrissy Bubbles

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Comment by julih on 01/24/13
intresting what a way to great a lazy person

Comment by Silvia. on 07/17/11
Very, very bad.

Comment by Amy Sadler on 02/08/08
I loved your little short story, please write more.

Amy.


Comment by juliej on 05/20/07
good story but to short &fast paced the soap i feel needs to be left out but more added to his night in the crib did they secure him baby mittons are good but even they can be got out of if enough time is given ie goind to bed at 8pm its easy enough if not secured properly to get out of the cri &the mittons

Comment by Baby Stacey on 11/21/03
Good story.Leave out all the soap though.

Comment by MIna on 05/31/03
Honestly, your stories are too much alike. You need to find some different premise ideas.



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