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Sport Model
by J.L. Williams

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Comment by Karen on 02/24/09
Hi JL,
A great story, well written, hope you are in a position to continue.
Karen

Comment by Amanda H on 05/23/08
I agree with Karen TV; Look forward to Sport Model - 03.

Comment by Donna  TV on 08/15/06
Please PLEASE hurry with the next episode...oh how I wish I could be in Bobbi's shoes... a simply gorgeous story, thank you

Comment by Carolyn Renee on 08/14/06
Lovely, lovely story! Please hurry with the sequel! I am so jealous of Bobbi -- wish that I was Bobbi!  Love & Kisses  Carolyn Renee

Comment by KarenTV on 08/14/06
What a wonderful story.  I can't wait until the next installment.



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