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SRU: Bimbo Bread
by Jezzi Belle Stewart

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Comment by Suzy on 12/13/11
Your's is the itnellignet approach to this issue.

Comment by John on 06/22/10
Excellent story, it was was really good fun.

Comment by Molly on 07/20/08
The author writes:

>>[Author note: Are you appreciating the author's experiment in punctuation alliteration , ie. (?) ? Thank you. However, I'm afraid all good things must come to an end. As you will see, at the end of day two (?) will no longer be necessary.]

I now know why the ???s are missing from so many of the other stories here on Story Site: Jezzi used them all up, and all in this one story (and here I was thinking that all those other poor authoresses were working with broken keyboards). You must share, m'dear, it's not nice to keep all of those ???s for yourself. :D


Comment by MonaR on 11/07/02
A very enjoyable tongue-in-cheek story which had me giggling in several places ... Ellie Dauberowski???



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