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SRU: Paper Dragon
by Kim West

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Comment by dana nichole on 06/20/06
great stuff. thank you kim for the warm-fuzzy feeling.

Comment by Tina Michelle Smith on 11/22/04
This was a really cute story, Kim.  I enjoyed it a lot.

Puff was always one of my favorite songs when I was a kid, and it is still one of my faves now that I'm *ahem* mature.  (Older than dirt!)  It was great to find a new way to enjoy an old friend.  Somehow I think Peter, Paul, and Mary would enjoy it as well.

Thanks for writing it.

Comment by Aardvark on 11/21/04
Nice one, Kim!

Sweet and sentimental describes it pretty well, but unlike some corny sacharrrine stuff, this one leaves you with a good feeling.

Aardvark

Comment by Jillmi on 11/21/04
It's too bad that all Storyite stories aren't this sweet and sentimental.

What a refreshing change!

Jill

Comment by maggiethekitten on 11/21/04
Huggles

Thank you so much for a warm and wonderful little tale.  That song always makes me cry as I felt so sorry for poor Puff.  I am really glad to see you've given him a full time job.  

hugs and cuddles, Maggie

Comment by Nellie D on 11/20/04
A nice TG twist to the old Peter, Paul and Mary song. And nicely fleshed out to make a very good read.



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