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SRU: The Map
by Ellie Dauber

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Comment by Brenda Brennan on 10/24/10
Cool, looking forward to the next installment.  :-)

Comment by Alison on 04/29/09
There's a suggestion that's been going round for many centuries that had Moses been a woman she'd have stopped to ask the way and her flock would have found the Promised Land in a week.  And perhaps women have as much trouble reading a map as do men.  As Roseanne Barr put it:"Men have much less trouble map reading because they understand how two inches on the map can represent a hundred miles on the ground."

Comment by k mixon on 04/24/08
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Comment by Barbara Lynn Terry on 04/14/03
Delightful! But, where was that darn wizard when I needed him in 1969? Drat! never a good old wizard around when you need one...LOL...Ellie this is a very fine short story of the Spells R Us universe...I enjoyed this very much

Barbara Lynn Terry

Comment by Petra Jane on 01/07/01
I LIKE IT!
Where on earth have the Spells R'U being all these years?

Excellent story and really enjoyed the ending.



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