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Star Crossed Lover
by Jennifer White

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Comment by Early June on 07/14/04
Jennifer is a fantastic story writer.  She is not only prolific, but she has such a rich imagination and makes each variation on a theme interesting and enjoyable. I liked this one for the gentle twist and the ensnaring of the plotter in his/her own subterfuge.
Your writing is almost professional with your careful plotting and timely pacing. You develop your characters enough in your tales they take on a personality.
Please keep up the excellent work Jennifer.

Comment by Annabel on 06/21/04
An intriguing story, beautifully written and paced just right.  I love the little twists as the plot unravels.
And being a romantic at heart, I always love a happy ending where everyone finds true love.



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