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Starting With A Kiss
by Mardee Louise Prynne

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Comment by Silvia      (from Brazil) on 10/20/09
I'm sorry, but this isn't a good story. I really disliked this story!
Sorry, but this is what I think!
Silvia.
 

Comment by louis on 09/19/09
I thought the story was grand. If only I had a friend like Shelby. I would have been interested in him. A young man who wore panties and short shorts and didn't care what anybody said. Very demanding and said it like it was. I like to picture Shelby as 5'8" 150 lbs blue or green eyes brown hair.



Comment by Angela E. on 09/23/07
I hope there will be a sequel,but I loved the ending anyway.Keep it up (no pun intended).

Comment by maltor on 08/02/07
Great story, hope there is more in the pipeline to tell of her adventures as she gets older and more experienced.  As for the incest, as they are not biologically related, there is nothing wring with it.  But then again, I don't have a problem with incest stories even where they are related.

Comment by suna on 07/31/07
The story was fine til the incest part.....

warnings would be good ...




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