I just love the story it was a bit long winded but being in the closet myself i just love storys about crossdressing.

I look foreward to the ending chapter.

I loved your stories special this one. You kept me on the edge of my seat. I felt like i was right there. I really enjoyed it till i noticed the dates that they where written. It's been so long i hope all is well with you and you will continue the story about Stephanie & Ken and the fun friends. Thanks for this adventure with Stepanie & Ken.

  I look forward to reading more about Stephanie's scheme. The author put me right into the story and kept me mesmerized throughout. My only disappointment is that the story left me hanging, wanting more. Please add the remaining chapters very soon. Send us more of your prose Alamo Preacher.

If you like the first 7 chapters of this great story do not bother reading the additional chapters.  The story takes a drastic U turn and becomes quite disappointing.

This story is continued at my site alamo-preacher.com

I've only read the first part of the story, but I laughed happily several times during the first chapter - that's a good sign!

So far, I could easily see the described places in my mind's eye. Still,  enough room is left for the imagination of the reader. Might be made into a film script.

Consider using a spell checker, since the occasional typos make a reader stumbel (see ?-).

Overall: well done. I'm looking forward to read the following chapters ...

great story but is there any more to it

The best story I have ever read. Great job.
And it should continue, but that seems unlikely :(.

I can relate to Ken.  I started dressing with the aid of an older cousin when I was 7. Then when I was caught wearing her clothes my punishment was I had to spend a year dressed as a girl. (SOME PUNISHMENT!!) That was the mind set in 1939.  At the end of that year when I was supposed to stop wearing the clothes nothing happened.  Everyone was so used to me being dressed that I just continued.  So I lived as a girl growing up and as a woman the rest of my life.

About Ken and her sister:  I detect overtones of incest there.  Although you never came out and said it the story seems to be progressing to that end. (Don't get me wrong but I see nothing wrong in such a situation and could add a new perspective to the plot.)

I read all that you have written of this story and am waiting for you to post more of it.

So far you have done a fine job of keeping me entertained.

Oweena

I DO HOPE THAT THERE WILL BE MORE TO THIS STORY. I HOPE THAT KEN AND HIS GIRLFRIEND GET TOGETHER AND GO TO COLLEGE. IT WOULD BE NICE TO SEE A HAPPY ENDING FOR THOSE 2. I HOPE STEPH ENDS UP HAPPY AS WELL. AS FOR THE FATHER AND CHERIE I AM STILL AMISS ON HOW THAT MIGHT TURN OUT. I LOVED THE STORY SO FAR. PLEASE DO SOME MORE.

Wow! I found this in the midst of my habitual searching for stroke stories. Before I realized it I _was_ Ken, wondering what the fuck is up  with my sister, wondering about my own sexuality, aching for some time alone with Ellen. Such fascinating and compelling characters and great storylines. I love that Ken is coming into his own self, even if he is still not sure where he will end up. I'd love to spend some time in his shoes. Great story, please continue!

Scott

cool story loved it please wright some more i love your style and hope to read more of this story

what a great story sister is the dommnant one it will be interestingto see how this story goes on.

I've really enjoyed this story - so far!!!!!!  You are going to finish it soooon?  Please keep writing you have a wonderful talent.

Did I really read that right? Stephanie's getting Ken to dress as
a girl for purposes she hasn't yet fully revealed, & she's docking
his pay to cover the cost of the drag? I don't believe that!!! Hey,
Steph, You want it, YOU pay for it! And if you want some financial
aid, you'd better stop treating him with such withering contempt.
"Pervert," indeed! I'd see her in he11 before I'd go along with a
scheme on those terms. Ken is weak-willed and certainly not the
brightest candle on the Menorah, either. You make him sound like
one of Vickie Tern's males, in fact, & they don't come much dumber
than that....
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--Pervy

very nice story line so far; i hope you are going to add more chapters. i want to see how you are going to reconcile his new mom and his dad finding out about his feminization. also in what light will mom see him as a stepdaughter.

I'm just about halfway through this story at the moment and really enjoying it. I thought I'd leave a comment now as I have to leave reading the rest of it for a few days. The characterisation is excellent as with your other works I've read. The foibles of the characters are detailed well and boy is it a tangled twisted web.

I'm gripped by the story and have to know how it turns out. It's not quite my usual cup of tea, but I am enjoying it. There is more bad language than I am normally comfortable with.

Some points which are hopefully constructive: you have set this story in the UK and I am presuming that you are from North America. There are a few expressions which are not typically British:
Social Security Number should be National Insurance Number
We don't have ID cards
Mom is usually Mum this side of the pond
College guys would normally be described as Uni guys.
Of course if I have misplaced you and you are British and have just decided to use the above by choice, feel free to ignore what I've written... but then you can ignore me anyway can't you? I'm rambling now... I'll finish this story in a few days. Thanks!

Love,

Jenny