I would have tendered my resignation and had divorce papers served at the end of the first installment. Then again I would not promulgate an atmosphere inconducive to the emotional and mental well being of women in the workplace.

Oh my GOD!
Humiliated at work and home?
This non exist!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'm sorry, but this is crazy!
Very bad non TG story!

I would just like to add to the other favourable comments about this three part story and ask Becky if she could let us have a 4th part as soon as possible. I can see that there is plenty of room for further humiliation of the two sissies, through development of the "Jenni at the rodeo" theme or via the arrival of ranch hands at Carol's ranch - 1 hand to take over as Carol's partner and the other seducing Jenni? As for Missy, "her" role at work, with its increasing feminisation, offers scope for a lot of humiliation and embarrassment, while the potential for a Laura and Karen partnership could mean Missy ends up as secretary by day and maid in the evening.

So, Becky, please keep up the good work!

I just love the story and hope you continue. I just think it's wonderful. I especially like the idea of pranks being played on our little girl. Imagine her in the bathroom trying to insert a panty liner with wings carefully into her panties while the entire office watches via webcams in the bathroom stall!

i have been a closet drossdresser most of my life.
i like your story, too bad it is not completed as yet.
i would like to read more as soon as it is finnished.

                         thank you

Dear Becky, I love your stories, especially the detail about fashion, material (chiffon, satin, etc.) that you include. I am a closet CD so I can fantasize about being Bob or his friends. Perhaps it might be fun for Bob to be in an affair with his boss or mentor Amy. Hugs, Andrea

the story is still brilliant  it would be intresting to introduce a real mean female dominant woman to train hime better his wife &secretary have done a great job i feel that now it needs some tweeking &twists of thetail how about his new boss being the domminant and that she has a meeting with his wife at dinner then gets invited to her home unknown to him end up a the maid for the weekend with a bit of bondage &caging involed it would make a terrific twist brilliant story more please also i agree it would be also fine to finf out more abouth the dominating stepmother &son as well as with john &carol maybe a meeting of all at the dinner party and progressing from there hope to read nex issue soon thankyou

the story is still brilliant  it would be intresting to introduce a real mean female dominant woman to train hime better his wife &secretary have done a great job i feel that now it needs some tweeking &twists of thetail how about his new boss being the domminant and that she has a meeting with his wife at dinner then gets invited to her home unknown to him end up a the maid for the weekend with a bit of bondage &caging involed it would make a terrific twist brilliant story more pleas

Dear Becky Marie
  Well it is Jan 2006 and I have just encountered your story.  Of course it is very exciting and full of adventure for Missy and Jenni- and lots of hilarious amusement for Karen and Carol putting the sissies through their little humiliations.  
   Joe Mitchell I can see is problematic for you.  Your readership is largely hetero and you don't want to turn them off- but perhaps we have to deal with the fact that when people become feminine in dress and manner and attitude over a long course of change- it is hard to maintain such rigid anti-male interaction.  Slowly you change and perhaps that is what is happening to Missy especially if Joe begins to treat her like a person and not humilate her.  That will go a long way with changing Missy's attitudes.  Of course, Karen will see the change and may assist the process.  That will make it sit better with our hetero selves.  
  The sissy boy with step-mother and step-sister may be explored for further more dominating type interaction.  Hope we see part 4 soon as I am enjoying the series very much. Thank you for writing it.
Hugs
Mandee

These stories are tremendous.  I love reading about Missy and Jenni.  Becky, please give us more!!!

Becky, I just re-read this. Are you EVER giving us a part FOUR?  It drives me nuts to think this is not going to continue.

I get off on these three parts and this last one most of all. I also love seeing a boss forced to become a femmy secretary and the idea of a ranch owner becoming a girlie barrel racer is great in itself. One thing you haven't done much with is the hair changes.  Seems like Bob/Missy is heading toward more feminine clothes at work but what about the hairdo?  Same with Jenni.  Some of the comments I've read here and at fm say there ought to be a point where both are "broken," and a hair makeover for both would be a great deal.  I also look forward to Karen and Laura plotting more against Missy.

This is so great, Becky...I just can't say enough.  I wish I could get my secretaries to do this to me...but I'm the opposite of Bob/Missy.  Maybe Halloween!

One thing I find interesting.  In the first chapter, it's clear that some of the girls at work notice Bob's changes.  It's also clear that Carol told the girls about him.  Yet in Chapter 3, she's telling him what she wants in order to not reveal his crossdressing.  Seems to me she's already outed him to the other girls and everyone else including his boss has taken notice.

That is just a continuity bump.  I love this story very much, and I normally only reader shorter pieces.  I do enjoy seeing a boss whittled down to size, forced to become a secretary under women he treated so badly. In fact, if Bob complains, this could almost be seen as discipline for his past bad behavior.  I hope you deal with how he handles this, and how he adapts to being a "girl friday."  He does need to be skirted at some point at work and maybe given a more femmy hairdo. Since he's so upset at this halfway feminization he would probably be better off to just go into dresses but there's got to be some way to do this. You are so clever you'll find a great way!

Fantastic! Can hardly wait for next segment. Will Joe get into missie's panties?  Or is he wearing his own?

I've read all three of these parts and thank you Becky.  It is one of the best TG fiction series ever!

My dear just great I wrok as Jane but I dont know if I could go through what Missy goes through.Keep up the good work

I like this whole series so much.  Never much liked those boss becomes a secretary stories but this one's changed my mind because it is so well done.  Another clever twist here. None of the usual hormone business. That is often times over done by TG fiction writers.  None of the maid business either which has been overdone a hundred times (and there are plenty of those kinds of stories already). The meeting between Laura and Karen ought to be something.

And the comments about the Joe character are worth thinking over. If the guy was this bad he deserves some frillies of his own.

Becky, sorry I just got a chance to read this and I can only join in the profuse praise.  What an awe-inspiring piece of work. I am so glad you decided to pick this story up again and run as you have here with it.

The way you've been moving Missy into her feminization at work is tantalizing and paced so well.  I've had a little trouble getting used to Jenni in the 2nd part but here it all makes sense.  I agreed with Ax, though, about not really being clear on what Bob's wife Karen does for a living.  I LOVED getting her the little car.  Great.

The demotion (and it should be clear that is IS a demotion to a clerical position) to work for Laura was a surprise but you sure built the back story well to justify it.  And it's something some of my GG friends who work in offices confess as a fantasy. Demote the jerk male boss to a clerical job, force-fem him and treat him the same way.  What I love is, you make the feminization believable.  No ridiculous bimbo outfits, but stuff that could work.

I would hope Missy would be "Missy" in her new job (Laura could get HR to process that all right, complete with a new nameplate on her desk and a very clear sign that her immediate supervisor is as much Amy as Laura.  And you've got to somehow build up to his introduction to working in dresses and skirts, bringing Carol and everyone else in.  Demeaning chores I'm sure you've already got lined up.  And he should do them for Amy as well.  A female employee fashion show and secretary's day could prove interesting.

As far as the character of Joe, I don't know.  Ax made a case about the tension with Bob/Missy, and I can understand that as Bob is clearly straight. It seems like in a lot of stories the forcibly crossdressed guy loses his virginity to another guy but with what Joe did to the girls, he seems deserving of comparable treatment.

The only way I could see Joe and Missy as an item is if somehow Carol walked out on him or took a lover, which she doesn't seem to want to do.  I could see a cowboy grab Jenni, though.  The young kid from the dance class seems a bit superfluous.

But don't take these as negative comments, just observations.  I love the idea of Missy having to be lent out at work, especially to Carol's department.  And it'd be fun for some of those girls, Bob's old employees to have their say on the former "macho pig."

Thanks, Becky, for keeping on keepin' on!  I look forward to more as soon as you can get it. Be proud of what you've done here! For those of us who love these sorts of stories, you're a treasure!  

GREAT Job!  Thanks for the Stories!!
Was just wondering what kind of reaction it could be for Jenni if Carol got rid of the current Ranch hands and hired Female Ranch Hands in their place?
  Also was thinking if there would be any teenage boys getting feminized, maybe some trouble amkers from around the Ranch?

                                        Patti

loved your sissy story please continue to write more stories the humilation is great and just what sissies like me want

sissygirl

i loved the story!!!!!! a few years ago club dance was my must see tv. dreaming and wishing, aching inside that i was one of the pretty ladies dancing and twirling. i loved that show so much and you brought it back to me in the best way possible. all i can say is what a lucky girl missy is!!!

hugz
niqui

Oh, my God! Becky, I don't know what to say! I'm overwhelmed.  

You've introduced so many new dimensions here that it's almost breathtaking.   I was a bit puzzled about Missy's hairstyle, but the VW bug was inspired.  Perfect car for an office girl.  The humiliation was wonderful, and I loved seeing Missy relegated to go-fer status in his own department.  Clearly, Carol got promoted twice, once by Bob (though to what level we aren't clear) and again by Laura.

To introduce the fact Bob was not kind to Laura when she worked for him was a bit of genius, as it proves beyond a doubt that he's getting his comeuppance here.  I was kind of hoping he'd wind up as Carol's secretary, but Laura and Amy introduce an entirely new dimension here.  Is he subordinate to Amy though he's mentoring her?  I think it needs to be clear: he/she's DEMOTED, and In her new position, Missy should be a junior office worker to the other girls.  Laura sounds like she's got some great ideas (I'd LOVE to be in this situation!).

I'm figuring at the rate he's going it will be just a matter of time since the "secret" is pretty much out, that  Laura will mandate he come to work in skirts and dresses (perhaps to relieve the tension of being androgynous by just making the switch).  Might be a good dinner topic for her and Karen. Parading him through his old department would be a hoot.  Lending him to Carol and his old secretaries would be another hoot, or putting him in the typing pool for a time.

The golf segment was wonderful, in part because you were so specific about the equipment and so on.  It enhanced the believability of the entire section.  Clearly, if Missy's company has a women's golf team, she should be on it down the line/

Sounds like Jenni's being moved into the role of female barrel racer.  Interesting, but where that going isn't as clear.  I'm not from that neck of the woods but I can't imagine the barrel racer is that femmy a lady.  I wonder if she could do some other things around the ranch that would be appropriately girly.  But the sexual imagery of rodeos make this an exciting setting.

What I'm not as sure about is introducing Joe Mitchell.  As a source of tension for Bob, an old friend, he works fine.  But I don't know if introducing him as someone who might decide he wants Missy as a girlfriend is wise.  It seems the reason this story has worked so well is you've avoided that overused cliché.  It also sounds like Joe Mitchell could use a LOT of comeuppance himself along the same lines.

I also wonder what Karen does for a living.  That's never been made clear.  Both Missy and Jenni need more adventures together.

A+, girl.  And I can't wait to see the next part.

Ax

Loved it. I hope you keep dancing. I accidentally left the puter on part 2 and my girlfriend read it and started calling me a sissy and to get out. She finally calmed down and after agreeing not to hide anymore of my secrets, wait until she reads part 3! I'm a pro golfer and like to wear soffee shorts and little tops over a teeny weeny yellow polka dot bikini to the nude beach. She's going to have a field day with me. XOXOX, Sissi Riki