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Strip Poker
by Jennifer White

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Comment by nice seo guys on 11/20/13
gwDKon Thanks a lot for the article post.Really looking forward to read more. Awesome.

Comment by Silvia. on 02/23/09
I'm sorry, but this story is not good.
I don't like unfairs things.
Silvia.

Comment by suna on 02/08/06
I had hopes for this story but I see the plot was to kill him once she felt less than adored. This is just another revenge story .. the 'i use to love him' is a lie she would tell herself

yes, i know its a story, but in any day to day relationship you need to get the attention of the other person before the conversation actually begins. Don't complain that they don't listen when you talk at the same time they're reading.

Comment by Sara Lafem on 10/01/04
I realy like this story, can I play poker next time!?

Comment by tara on 09/26/04
Pretty good story I guess.  The whole "Bill" plot didn't do much for me, but not all CD's are into the guy fantasy.  I liked the first half a lot better.

However, I'm surprised nobody has mentioned yet that dosing a man with estrogen or any other hormone won't "give him the gay" any more than testosterone would make a gay man become straight.

I'm sure there are a lot of SRS people reading this site who could tell you all about what female hormones actually do to you.  You might want to talk to them before making that a part of one of your stories.

Comment by Early June on 09/24/04
Nice one.  Throughly enjoyable.  Especially so when the boob does it to himself.  I did feel saddened at jean's loss; But seeing the way he went, she is much better off without him.

Comment by Jane Hudson on 09/24/04
Deep down TG my dear.She a lucky girl to have a lovely guy like that

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 09/23/04
This one is pretty good.  Sharon created herself on her own out of a love of sports; the girls/Jean just made it possible.  What if Sharon finally wants SRS?  Will Bill agree?  I did think Jean's  "I used to love him once." at the end was kind of sad.



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