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A Stroll In The Park On Carnival Day
by Minnie

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Comment by Meadow on 07/21/11
I'm so glad that the itnneret allows free info like this!

Comment by Kamryn on 07/20/11
I serahced a bunch of sites and this was the best.

Comment by Sheryl S. on 10/09/03
Loved the story and most especially the atmosphere -- loved the interaction with Annette and with Peter.  Quite enjoyable.

Comment by leah on 06/10/03
Well, yeah, it is a fun read.Karneval in Germany can be a hectic time, but Minnie wasn't trying so much to explore the deeper sexual ramifications which would actually have cloaked her main arena.

Through Annette, the young man is gently proded into realizing just a few of the myriad decisions and ways of acting that women so often encounter in our culture. He proves a receptive subject and even learns to extrapolate a bit in the light and (I guess) mostly innocent interaction that finishes this piece.

This is  either a revelation or an exploration -- and it works nicely.

     leah

Comment by Pervette on 06/10/03
A delightful story. No coercion, no humiliation, no hate. Just
good, clean fun.

--Pervy

Comment by Paula on 06/10/03
a wonderful sweet story that warmed my heart of the gloomy rainy day that I'm currently having.



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