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Stupid
by Suzi Thomas

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Comment by "Missy," Susan Pauline on 02/09/11
Dear Miss Suzi,

This was a cute little story. There wasn't too much background information on the three characters but I guess it wasn't needed.

The ending was a bit different from what I thought it would be. A nice surprise. I thought, that he'd be going to work in women's clothes.

Although this entire Storysite is fiction, I can assure you, that alcohol diminishes a male's ability to reach an organism.

This was a nice, little diversion from my Housemaid Chores. My Mistress is my Wife.

Missy Susan

Comment by julie j on 11/14/04
i can imagine what this would be like if it happened in real life a good story short but well written
Comment by billie on 01/15/04
ya right like that could realy happen. prove me wrong and this might be a good story, like you could anyway
Comment by peter on 01/15/04
Started off as a good story, but then ended rather weakly.
Comment by Jane Hudson on 01/15/04
Great loved it .Bet he glad he lost that bet to two great but tough girls he /she never looked back. Keep up good work
Comment by Jane Hudson on 01/15/04
Great loved it .Bet he glad he lost that bet to two great but tough girls he /she never looked back.
Comment by GFriday on 01/15/04
What a great story, short, sweet and well-put together.  Wonder what his new position was in the company?
Comment by jimmyinwhite on 01/15/04
some times bragging can help you find your trueself. just ask suzi in this story.


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