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Subway Surprise
by Lia Monde

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Comment by David Martin on 07/06/23
Hot. Loved it. Wish there were more.

Comment by Davina on 04/07/12
A beautiful story in Lia's excellent prose.  It brought back a memory to me.  I once had a similar incident in a full tube train.  It was a very crowded evening rush hour and I was too scared to follow him after he invited me to when he got out at his station.  I've often wondered what going with him would have led to.  It was certainly a lovely feeling having him press hard behind me for around twenty minutes with the train rocking us around.  More stories please Lia, all yours are superb.  

Comment by SassySue on 10/17/05
Great little tale of sexual intrigue on the subway.  Wonderfully well written and highly erotic.

Keep up the good work.

SS

Comment by Leah on 07/21/05
I like my small city with moderate traffic and no subway, but this wonderfully written story will have me contemplating change for days and weeks. And on how many different levels and in what complex erotic arrangements I can only guess.

The final exchange on leaving at the station is simply brilliant.

Comment by JillMI (Angela Rasch) on 07/05/05
Now, that is how a TG story should be written. Wonderfully done.

Jill

Comment by Carolyn Renee on 07/05/05
Lovely, lovely story! I am so jealous and wish a beautiful woman would rub my silky panties like that! Love & Kisses  Carolyn Renee



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