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The Suicide
by Margaret Jeanette

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Comment by great link building on 11/21/13
f72CrW Awesome post.Really thank you! Much obliged.
Comment by Silvia    (from Brazil) on 10/28/09
Congratulations!This is a good story and I liked, but Rita doesn't deserve forgiveness. NEVER.
Please, keep writing in this way.
Kisses and hugs.
Silvia.
Comment by Roland on 10/15/09
How beautiful and warm.
"Feeling" is where Life is at.
It is conditioned thought and belief and their attendant behaviors that get us into all of our troubles.
Comment by Aleesha on 10/13/09
Your story was really great, how I wish I could be in Angela's shoes. Well done.
Comment by Raychelle on 10/27/05
Thank you for such a WONDERFUL story.
I LOVED it.
Again thank you.
Comment by Brandonia on 10/20/05
I really like this story, and I love seeing men put into female jobs and also uniforms.  In Britain and other European countries as well as Japan, the idea of female office workers, bank employees, etc. wearing work uniforms is more common than here.

Often in your stories the man winds up feminized, even in a work setting then is allowed to go back to manhood and his old job, even if he wants to dress.  Why not some day try that angle but have him WILLINGLY stay dressed AND in the lower-level job,be it office girl, secretary or something more?  I know when I retire, my wife, who sells real estate, and I plan on my becoming her assistant.  When no one is around, we've agreed. I will LOOK THE PART.  No slacks-just skirts!
Comment by Early June on 10/20/05
I always like your stories.  This is an exceptionally nice one.  It certainly displays the best of the people in the story.  I might have been a little personally affronted from the actions of the former wife but you have made her redeemed. The casual meeting of Roberta in a bar, which totally transformed the life, and death, for the new Angela is also very fortuitous. All in all the hero(ine) was very fortunate.
As we are fortunate too, to be able to enjoys the tales you gift us with. Thank for sharing it with us.
Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 10/20/05
Very sweet story.  The concept of committing suicide by changing your life 180o and actually committing to life was wonderful!  Congrats!


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