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Comment by ashley on 02/08/14
Ooohh , AAHHHH!!! yummy story. Comment by D Hotkiss on 04/04/09 yum.. just yum..HotkissFetish.ning.com fondles D. Comment by Sheryl S. on 07/13/04 The first-person expository is excellent. You may wish to work a bit on fleshing out Carmelita and her husband as people, not caricatures. The sex ideas are great and well-told, but the world is not nearly as hostile and as senselessly violent to sexual "deviants" as you imagine. You deserve more love, and so does your hero/heroine. Comment by latexslut on 07/12/04 loved your story. |
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