hun, if I was a cat I'd be on your lap, purring. I greatly enjoyed this story. Thanks for sharing!

i have read all the stories so far and i feel that you are a great writer with a vivd imagination their area few spelling mistakes but overall its brilliant well done

I have read both of the su-lin stories ansdtheyare very good the interesting part was him getting his revewnge on his ex girlfriend i can imagine what it will be like for her but would also be interested in reading more stories of sin -lin 7 also if his ex girfreind manages to escape and get revenge again

Great read although I have some points to bring up

1. What about the characters being male and then being transformed into female. While you do explain why they look female with the face breasts, legs, lower torso with the exception of the car accident with this story and tina you left out the male character having a penis. Well not totally as there is one scene in saintans where barbie does describe getting hard. Any reason not to focus on the characters biological gender? It would be interesting to see what kind of ideas you would come up in other stories to explain what his ex's do to hide this from others?

2. It feels just a little rushed but this in my view was more fun to read then tina series. Simply because the male and female side of the character was more intertwined. Where as with tina tim could only stand by and watch while this one simply complied with what was happening.

Your stories are good reads keep the good work up!

loved your story abd the nice twist in the end. Please do write more.

Thank you, thank you, thank you!  Judy deserves what's coming to her!  (Although, being the manipulative bitch she is, I wouldn't be surprised if she became head harem girl and had Mr. Suludad in skirts and chains.)  Just a note on some inconsistencies.  You state in this story that, "I used to like BDSM. Judy didn't. I guess I tied her up and tormented her one too many times."  To the best of my recollection, this was not the reason given in "Barbie Frever" for Judy's actions.  The reason given was that he was too girlie/sissyish, acting "like a Barbie".  Also, no explanation was ever given for Barbie having a past history with the girls of The Bistro.