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xg79fu Great, thanks for sharing this article.Really thank you! Awesome.

What felling, your story left me wanting more the why a good story is suppost to, congrats. Makes me wish I was young again, just to live out this dream. Is he/she going to swim eough to have a tan line to show his mom next fall, what about returning to school, or will she/he even cear.good job  

Yes! Yes, yes, yes! Oh why wasn't this me? Such a wonderful description of heaven.

I just loved this story  would love to be in this one I dont care about spelling or gramer its how the story makes you feel in side

Apart from the bad grammar and bad spelling, this is a good story line!
  Pixie. xx

Sure wish there was a way for Kylee to continue. She sure has misssed out. Wonder where she is now? Too bad things did not continue. This is a good story filled with enough fantasy and reality that makes it so much fun. Thanks.

SOOOOOOOOOO  nice  what a lovely story and the experience he had..
we can only dream .....thank you for writing this and DO write some more chapters before he grows up.....
thank you  Rone

Enjoyed reading the story but like to know if there will be more of Kylee,s story to read.

ok did you go on to due more like a part 3 or 4 this is relly good i liked it

a gem of a story well written &described it was hard that his mother didnot care what he wore very intresting this could go further as a story its good more please

Just found this little gem after reading your latest posting, My First Time.  I know it's been a while, but you really should consider writing another chapter or two for this story.  It's really quite good.

Since I'm handicaped this is about my only  entertainment and your stories are some of the best I've read.
I love reading about momms that curl her sons hair.
Have you posted on other sites?

Well this story was Added : 06-08-2001. I don't think Sally Ann ever intend on adding to or finishing this one. To bad it was a great start.

I loved this story and would love to see where the author takes it from here!  I can just imagine the whole summer spent in girl's clothes, the boys next door flirting with Kylee, and Kylee realizing that she wants to flirt back!  I sure wish there was more. . .

very good start to what could be a very interesting story Ilook foreword to reading about keiths aunts reaction some how I do not think that this will be the end of it I dont think the girls will let him get changed in a hurry look foreward to part 2

A good start to what might be an exciting story.  Not overdone.  Has a delicacy to it.  I like that the author did not just leap into the more graphic details that other stories rely on.  
An area for improvement is both punctuation and spelling.  It detracts from a story to have so many errors that would not be in the author's speech if he were simply reading it.  

LOve the story about Keithy/ kylee. Cant wait for part 2

enjoyed this sweet story and love the descriptions