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Summer Holidays
by Destiny

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Comment by Silvia on 06/27/15
Very, very bad story!

Comment by raven on 06/01/10
told her what

Comment by Yoron on 06/03/08
An open ending for all :)
Nothing wrong with that.
Still it could have been the beginning of a lighthearted novel.
To many here is into humiliation and abuse, this one seemed to me quite innocent.

One could as easily interpret his acceptance as the trust and faith he had in his somewhat dominant wife.
And she didn't try to degrade him.
And in the end they had what they wanted, right :)
A holiday..

Yoron


Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 04/30/06
I just re-read this story, and I kept seeing between the lines what I believe would be a more realistic, much darker story.  First, whether he liked the change or not, the fact that his wife would do this to him without his knowledge or consent, particularly as we are given nothing to indicate that he had displayed or even had any TG tendencies, doesn't say much for this being a good marriage.  If she thought he was the kind of man who would accept and enjoy this type of change, then why not explain it all and get him to agree to it?  Second, unless it is part of the spell, he adjusts way way too easily.  Since she IS doing this without knowledge or consent, I expect she knows he would not have agreed to it and would definitely not be happy about it so would have added  an "accept and enjoy" provision.  Who wants an unhappy child, especially a teenager, around when she wants to enjoy herself?  What IS she doing while "hubby" is artificially enjoying all the teen activity?  Given her selfish nature, I would imagine a little "afternoon delight" with the pool boy.  

My ending?  Back home, she tries to remove the spell and, while it works mentally, it doesn't physically because darling daugther got herself pregnant (What can you expect when a negligent mom doesn't supervise the activities of her hormone ridden teen?)  Then "mom" discovers she is pregnant.  Now a fully aware hubby is trapped as a pregnant teen, and also eventually knows that his wife, while he was bespelled, was being unfaithful.  WOW.  I may actually write this ...  

Comment by Morgan on 01/01/04
Agreed! Worth reading but the whole story is definately a tease


Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 10/13/02
You tease!  What a nice story, but what a horrible way to end it! :-)



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