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A Summer I'll Never Forget
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Comment by speedy on 03/14/12
Excelent start I can see alot of fun things you can do II hope to read more Comment by antonia on 01/11/07 What a pity this story is plagued by bad spelling and punctuation. Surprisingly even the previous comments suffer from the same disease. Comment by Matthew on 12/14/05 Enjoyed reading your story but would like very much to read the concludion of this story sometime. Comment by julie j on 08/07/05 i stand by my previous comments more please Comment by julie j on 11/05/04 this story is a classic set up by the girl in cahoots with the head counciler great story well written look forewards to reading the nex parts Comment by harlequin on 07/08/03 It is very good, I liked it alot, but am just looking for more of it. I will be egearly awateing the continuation of it Comment by Barbara Lynn Terry on 07/06/03 very good start sakura...now enquiring minds want to know...does he tell his mom and start his journey into womanhood in earnest...or does he get caught with consequences again by his mother??? Whichever way it goes she must be the girl fate has decreed she be. Comment by jimmyinwhite on 07/06/03 this is a good start to a wonderful story. checking the spelling might help but otherwise it's a good story. my spelling isn't so hot either. that's why i haven't wrote a story myself. Comment by nicole on 07/06/03
Comment by Angel O'Hare on 07/06/03 Sakura, Comment by leah on 07/06/03 Dear Sakura! Comment by g on 07/06/03 good story, Keep it going Comment by Paula on 07/05/03 a surprisingly good story. The pace was great and interesting method to start off on the ride home from camp and go into flashback. |
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