Another fantastic story. It goes to show that nature can get it wrong but these two lovers are able to work thruogh it. Thanks.

I loved it.
One of your best stories.
Silvia.

I have no words for this story.
That's one of your best stories I have read.
Silvia.

I just loved 'Summer Switch'.  I guess that's every Transgirl and Transboy's dream come true.  A gentle, romantic story with a reasonably plausible plot.  OK maybe only 98% but I just enjoyed the story!

Hugs,

Susie

hope to see more of this story in future,

Another good story from one of my fave writers. I am so impressed with your creativity.  You make so many variations on a theme; and you always work to keep a familiar situation from becoming trite. When ever I see a story of yours in a list, it is the first that I download and I put it in my Jennifer White folder.  Thank you again for gifting us with your talent.

You have such a fertile and sweet imagination.

You need to work some on your mechanics to take your stories from very good to excellent.

Stories flow better with timely exposition. When you tell something too late in the story it causes the reader to pause. TG readers are very willing to suspend their disbelief, but even those gentle readers have a limit. For example, in your story it would have been better if you had told us up front about the wealth on one side of the family.

You needed to give us a plausible reason for an uncle and aunt to have never seen either their nephew or neice.

At the end you needed to give us a plausible reason for two teenagers to be allowed to live whereever they want.

Punctuation helps the reader. You need to include a commma before the attribution. As in, "I think you're wonderful," Tom said.

There is some dispute, but most writers seem to think you should always say "Tom said" instead of "said Tom". If you think of "said" as a verb you will understand why.

After a question mark it should be "asked" not "said".

Readers don't want to get bogged down in needless repetition. Tell once, rarely tell twice.

Instead of telling us how happy someone is, show us.

You have great talent. Your stories are getting better. Try reading this book. It will help.

http://www.amazon.com/exec/obidos/tg/detail/-/0898798213/qid=1098118889/sr=1-3/ref=sr_1_3/102-5143853-5084142?v=glance&s=books

Jill

what a lot of fun!

sweet and sexy.

an enjoyable fantasy.

a wonderful story to read again and again

Great love story!

Hugs from Sissy Baby Paula and Snowball (my toy puppy)

A very nice story!
Thank you Jennifer
Hugs, Fran