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Summertime Girls
by Jennifer White

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Comment by Don Carrie A. on 08/11/12
I LOVED this story!!!!!
Comment by Diane Morrill on 10/10/09
Having in the distant Past written many TG Tales through which I lived my secret life, I was fully aware of how very real-to-life this story was. Every thought, action, and especially the feelings expressed and lived through were as real-to-life as one will find them... any-where, any time.
It is rare while reading this type of material that I get to feel so warm and runny inside... at times, a little smiley-teary, too, for I, too, could have been Sarah.
Thank you, JW.
Comment by ALISON MARY on 09/05/09
 A lovely,sweet,emotional story.Thank you so much Jennifer,I hope you
write some more in this vein in the future.May God bless you.ALISON
Comment by juliej on 04/29/08
sweet story full of compassion &understanding brilliant well done
Comment by rone welles on 10/30/06

defitnely a great story a must read and this is a complete and lovely all the way through story ...

loved it thank you thank you thank you >> Rone

Comment by Early June on 04/29/06
I really, really loved this story.  It was so sweet and loving.  All of the characters, even the young, immature ones, considered the others in their decision making.  This is a unique example of a unique love story.  Very well done!  Thank you so much for this gift.  Thank you for posting it.
Comment by Angel O'Hare on 03/27/06
I liked the story, sweet and sentimental it is!

But, you needed to proof it a little better or have someone else do this. One other thing is that in the salon the hairdresser mentioned that Sarrah had the same eyes, nose and smile as her cousin. Now, if they were related I could agree with that easily, but the cousin was adopted, so it made this part a stretch.

There is more, but I have said enough. Just know that i truly enjoyed your story.

Huggles
Angel
Comment by A Reader on 03/24/06
Nice story -- a bit different from your usual tale. A question I have is why the sex change at the end -- it seemed to be unnecessary.
I think they would've stayed together, as the appeared to be a perfect couple. But, just a thought i had.
Comment by sarah h. on 03/24/06
Nice story. I want to think that I have read one like it before.
Comment by Sissy Baby Paula on 03/24/06
A sweet story with a romantic twist to ensure happy ending. Just wish I was Sarah!

Hugs,
Sissy Baby Paula and Snowball (my toy puppy)


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