great, hope you let it develop into a real love with extra

I loved the story.  I could almost imagine I was Toni.  Please, please finish it

this was a really good story and needs to be continued to fruition.
wish the site was coming back up, loved your work so far.

oh please finish this story .....pretty please....???? I love it .

      Stephen J

I just finished the first part of the story and I love it ......very smooth and sentimental ......I am soo looking forward to part two....I hope you write a lot more stories like this one .

    Stephen J

A super story , one that I can see actually being quite real ! Lovely and Kudos.

Dear Gail: In 2002 I wrote a comment that I believed this story was head & shoulders above the rest of this site. I wish you had finnished this treasure. I still believe the story is well worth finnishing For some reason this work keeps coming back to my mind & reverie. With the passage of time  I am more fearful of incompletion of the story I hope against hope that one day on fictionmania or the big closet I will see your renewed effort. Until then, au revoir Another Brian

i loved the story and wished i could "live" it as well.
hopefully the story will continue especially as it seems we are at the romantic beginnings.
thank you

Great story. Just wish I could live it.

I have read the 2 parts of this story more than once. I really like the way it was unfolding. I have checked back over the years and have hoped for more installments. I keep hoping........

 I have to agree with Lisa.The story has too many possibilities to
not finish it so please get back to the keyboard.Thank you so much
for the story so far.May God bless and love you.Alison

Please Please finish the story! Add as many chapters as it takes. Toni is one lucky girl and deserves to be finished. It even makes for a great fantasy that all could read. Perhaps this would even make a nice book some day for the best sellers lists.

Please,PLEASE finish the story.

after 8 years, i doubt if there will be a conclusion to this story, such a shame, it started getting interesting now robert is taking more notice of toni as a girl. the storyline is great, surely love must blossom.

Are you going to do an end for this story?
Toni deserve be a real girl, and to make SRS.  
Kisses.
Silvia.

I would only hope that someday either this author or someone would finish the story line. I loved the college girl aspect-my only wish was that I could have been able to be Michelle when I was that age instead of living in fear in 1965.

Hi I enjoyed parts one and two of this story.  I hope you will decide to write part 3. There are many who would like you to finish it.

Yeah it's a sweet summer romance :)
Somewhat different perhaps, but quite ok.

You should finish it.

cheers
yoron.

when are you going to finsh this story

Wow,
I love the story.  Just came across it.
But Rats!  Not to be finished?
:(

Dear Gail,

I just stumbled across your lovely story about Tony/Toni. The progression really is nice and the pace of the story it just right. Dear, is there some reason why you have not finished out this story. I think Jezzi had it right two years ago expressing the same thoughts. The story line is really dellcious. Please do not keep us hanging with Toni being fondled.

Love,

Cassandra

I'd to see what happens...

Hi Gail  :-)

Is there any chance that you will finish this fine story?

Hugs, Fran

very lucky a good story intersting how the girls sent him hormone tablets it will be intersting to read how the rest of the holiday goes and when he goes back to campus next part please asap well done

All that I can say is, please complete it. Rarely one finds a good mixture of story angles and TG curves. God bless you.

When I saw the posting dates, I was hoping this very good story would be just two parts.  Such a shame; since it's been almost 2 1/2 years, I doubt it will be finished.

This is beautiful, well-written story. The characters were nicely developed.It gave me a nice, warm and cozy feeling. It's almost as the author was the main character. By all means this story does need to be continued. The developments at Toni's home, the next school year, and the relationship with Robert as well as Toni's relationship with Tony are all just waiting to be told. It's nice to read a story without sexual actions being the main part of the story. Keep up the good work!

Susan

This is a good story. But now you are going to start getting into sexual acts. If that is the case, I will not read your third installment. Can't people who write these stories leave the sex out?

Barb

Please continue this story.

I read this when it first came out, and again a few months later... and just finished reading it again... but...  Each time I read it I see that note at the bottom "To be continued".  Those three words have caused me more dispair than I care to count.

Continued WHEN....  Your loyal following is Waiting!

Zip

A really nice story, well thought out and written. I look forward to reading the next installment.

Of the numerous stories on this site this is one I find myself coming back to repeatedly. I find this well written story to be full of hope laughfter suspence and a generally feel good warmth for the hero/ heroine. We need more parts added to this story.

Great stories. Am looking forwardto the next installment.

I appreciated the way that the author lead the story to it's conclusion and the way it turned out. It's like a dream come true for those who read stories like this to think it could really happen. I found the story well written with a lot of thought going into it and the events that transpire to the eventual ending. I'm glad I had the opportunity to read this wonderful work and hope others take the time to give it a try.

This is more of a descriptive story than a dramatic one.  It's a little slow and still unfinished as I write this.  Probably the same problem I have sometimes--start writing and then get 'blocked'.  I've found that a story plan helps prevent that from happening.

Nevertheless, it is evenly told, and doesn't jolt the reader out of the mere pleasure of reading.