Excellent story, two dominant kinky ladies at their cruelest!  Why don't I ever encounter women like this? :(

QLnXex wow, awesome post.Thanks Again. Awesome.

Once again... a person can accept their circumstances and still hold their assailants accountable for causing those circumstances. There is nothing that says he has to stop plotting retribution. I know I wouldn't.

I thought I'd have to read a book for a dicosevry like this!

Silvia, I do not hate women, I can assure you of that.  Just saying that this is fantasy not reality, as much as some of us would like it to be the other way around.

Why do you hate women so much?
Disgusting!

Agree with the comments about too many clichés, although still a good read.

@ whyguys; I don't feel threatened by the extremely unlikely event of me being feminized and humiliated, these stories don't scare me at all as they are just fiction.  Men are dominated only if they want to be, mankind has many years left in charge I'm afraid.  

Way back when a Female writer named Mary Shelley frightened the people of her time having written "FRANKENSTEIN".  Today, the threat of forced feminization and humiliation fills with terror the hearts of male readers from the pen of Cristina Shelly.  I suspect the latter authoress' visions are closer to realization than the former.

BEWARE, MALE SEX YOUR TIME IS UP. THE AGE OF WOMAN IS AT HAND!  

I must agree with my maid Priscilla Ann. The feminization and transformation of utterly stupid David into the mindless sexy bimbo Daphne is worth the price of admission, so to speak. Mistresses Helen and Sally were devilishly clever, deviously cruel and delightfully masterful in feminizing and training Daphne as both a saucy maid and, ultimately, office "gal" Friday. Of course, now that I have read (and re-read) this wonderful saga, my sissy maid Priscilla Ann is in for some very inventive punishment and torment -- very inventive, indeed. Well done. Ms. Shelly.

I very much enjoyed this story. I admit that I love a happy ending, which this story contained, with Daphne happy in her dual role as office junior and maidservant, and enjoying a great sex life! So, many congratulations and many more stories.

Wonderful story. And, a perfectly fitting end for Daphne (David). Great descriptions of feminization and training. And yes, I must reiterate, a quite delightful end for Daphne, indeed.

i liked all of the sissy training and dildo punishment, but why the homo sexual activity?

a second reading of this story gives me more of an insight into this story well done its well written &DESCRIBED WITH A LOT OF EXPLANATION THE TALENT FOR WRITING IS GREAT AND YOU HAVE DONE A GOOD JOB THE SET UO OF THISSTORY AND THE MAKE OF IT ALL IS BRILLIANT WELL ONE

I had trouble sleeping and looked for a story that was X rated and contained maid and bondage.  I got more than I had hoped for.  This is a well written story by a good story teller.  I would love to see more X rated stories by you.

go girl go!

a wonderful story of capture &training starting with an unusual set up by sally its interesting how long it took but hard work this could have more added to it without ruining it a great story wellworth reading well done

Another wonderful story, I'm sure drinking the women's urine would have been a wonderful and humiliating experience. Your stories are always top notch.

As a prissy sissy pansy, I thoroughly enjoyed this story. It  kept my interest to the end through the love making of the other shemale. I also wear perfumed cock nylons and appreciated Daphne taking the perfumed cock nylon off her lover's cock. I moaned with pleasure throughout the whole story, until I wet my silky panties toward the end of it. Thanks, write some more. Misty

I enjoyed this story.  As others have mentioned, a tad predictable, but superbly written and structured, with the tension building to a logical conclusion.
I appreciate how much pride you must have in your work to make your story appear so professional (especially compared with some other stories on this site), so please take my next comment as the most extreme nit-picking pedantry.  I did notice a couple of malapropisms, ascent instead of assent and viscous instead of vicious.
Thank you for taking so much trouble to write so well.
Hugs, Annabel

Fun I like it far fetched yes but fun

This story or what I read of it is actually pretty well written but I couldn't get past all of the cliches.  The short with a slight frame and pretty face thing has been done to death. I know such peolpe are out there but why do so many have to shw up in TG fiction?

Well written but I don't care for all these cliches. Seen 'em a thousand times before.