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A Superhero Saga
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Comment by dee on 08/09/07
this is a great story but what happens at the park, and make sure not to leave any details out...fan and friend Comment by blake on 08/04/07 hi, my friends...i've got a new story in the making, but got sidetracked due to a whole series of misfortunes, however, superheros may get down, but never, NEVER, count them out!! blake and chloe have a chance to get an exposure boost via an opportunity to have their very own website...if anyone is interested in any aspect of production, please let me know! the site is a fee site, r-rated, and promises to be a total gas!!! this is a serious offer...anyone who participates shares equally in any revenue that is generated--plain and simple, huh? fir more info, please e-mail me, at hss445@msn.com. also, please be advised that your comments have done more for me than you may ever imagine!! thank you... Comment by juliej on 05/19/07 a brilliant story where is the next chapter please Comment by Erik on 11/17/06 Ohmygod! you can't stop now, publish the next chapter. Comment by Julie Michelle on 07/13/06 Wonderful saga -- but it lacks something. Namely, a Part 2! You've got me wanting to know what happens next, the best question an author can be asked! Comment by juliej on 05/23/06 it amazing what girls dream up its a pity i was not the one caught like that but no such luck great story more please Comment by Balletboy on 05/22/06 Nice story. I never had the pleasure of dressing up with the girls. I did dress up in leotards and tights and a dance brief to be a superhero. It was great! I also would have loved to be made to go to ballet class dressed as a superhero or a sissey ballerenia. Comment by chrstina ballerina on 07/12/04 Blake is lucky to have cousins like that. Hope he enjoys being turned into a ballerina from a superhero. A nice tutu would look better than briefs |
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