WOW! Great story.
I loved.
Kisses.
Silvia.

WOW! what a great yarn. Loved it, so keep them cumming!

just a great read. Only critism, where is part 2

Bravo! I really enjoyed this story although homosexuality is not normally my thing. It is excellently done.

Surprising indeed, and what fun as well!!!  Quite interesting in the characterisations, and the stuff of many of our fantasies, for certain.  My only advice if you decide to refine this one a bit more is to slow down its pacing and tone down Bethany's emotions just a tad -- on the one hand she's very sly and methodical, then emotionally she expresses herself like a loose cannon, all over the map, unacceptable shows of anger and arrogance for a new female, methinks.  And, she should probably struggle a bit more with guilt.  But these are nuances meant as constructive criticism if you want to take the piece to a more literature-like level.  As a romp on a TG website, it's just marvelous as is.  I wish you the best of New Years, and how many of us would just love to be at a party as Bethany in the role you described!  Keep up the great work, sister!

Love & Huggles,
Sheryl S.