Hi Alyssa.
Good story. But I think that Fran, should have made SRS, and be the woman she wanted to be.
I Liked it.
Kisses.
Silvia.

Another goodie. Thanks.

A wonderful story! It was so sweet of Frank to do his buddy this big favor. And Phil was so sweet in being the perfect gentleman for Fran, never pushing to hard, just letting them each find their own deep true feelings. The timing of finding their feelings was exceptional. Each caring for the other in a romantic way. Though I did feel that maybe Phil should have "brought" Fran home earlier than a year, to meet his parents, so they would get off his back about finding a girlfriend. I mean after all, Phil must have told them that he was dating a girl, I'm sure they would insisted on meeting her long before a year had passed.

I wish I had a friend like Phil, cause I feel just like FRAN!

That was a very sweet story.  The love that a man can have for a man can almost be as intence as the love a man can have for a woman.

Oweena

I reeeellly liked your story.  Great job! Wish I had a buddy named Frank.  

Quite simply one of the best ,if not the best on the storysite. Economic language,clarity and sensitivity add to the durability and repeated readability of the developing love story. it would be nice to have the last few paragraphs expanded but one should never try to improve on the best.

A short story of changes brought on by doing a "simple favor" for a close friend. I can understand the underlying reason of response to the gossip mill and the feeling of needing to offset the remarks of the peer group.

The story was good as is but more detail and character developement would make it close to excellent.