In part one it says little brother Peter but during the story Peter changes to David??? And the end of it is the same as 1 or 2 other stories I've read of yours, but except them great storys

I loved the Susan stories and wish I could have been her.

  Nothing forced,no sex and as sweet as sugar!!What more could one ask for?Once again,thank you so much for so much enjoyment.You are an
absolute treasure.May God bless you.Many thanks,ALISON.

I almost cried while reading this unbearably lovely, almost too-good-to-be-true tale; a perfect advertisement for the sheer wonderment of dressing up and posing as the opposite sex, especially at that age. One of the most bold, daring, captivating, glorious adventures life can offer, if done properly.

On reading the synopses for Jennifer's other stories here on Story Site, this appears to be her only one that does not revolve around themes of revenge, punishment, and "bad boy to good girl." Stories about characters who are the hapless victims of the darker side of feminine energy are all too common in this genre; it is refreshing to read the occasional story that doesn't go there.

An incredibly sweet, precious, lovely, dreamy, modern British fairy tale of a story! THIS is my favorite type of story on this site...one based in reality and set in the present without stooping to raunchiness, disgust, or horror. Any little boy desiring to spend at least part of his childhood as a little angel-princess for innocent fun couldn't do better than with such a mother and sister.  And "Mick" needs to be taught how good she has it.  Thank you, Jennifer! And thank Heaven for little girls! Love, Nan

I just finished reading "Little sister". I liked it and am glad that there is a part two. These stories without punishment and being forsed to dress are among my favorites, also the absence of sex is something very welcome.
Keep it up

Please, more clean, sweet, tender, compassionate stories like this!

   Fun, enjoyable, cute, altruistic, and really quite good. Susan's little sister shines as a story where dreams come true. As always we are rooting for the main character, Lucy, to succeed and you have kindly given us what we want. I supppose it is what you want as well, though of course Jennifer I have no way of knowing that.

   This story gets right to the heart of the mattter and dwells on the good parts. There is conflict and psychological drama and yet in many ways from the perspecive of a younger child. Since Lucy is ten that fits perfectly. Enough uncertainty not to go over the top in cuteness. In fact I love cute stories with supportive sisters and mums. So i ejoyed this very much. Thank you for sharing.

   Hugs,

   Kristi  

To the observant ones: Thanks for pointing out that early on in the story I called David 'Peter'. Dear me, sorry about that, I've asked Crystal to correct it.

This is a very delightful story of love, acceptance, understanding, friendship, and completion.

But all through the story you kept calling Lucy's "boy" persona David, but only made on mistake and called "him" Peter. But other than that tho, this is a very beautiful story of a life's goal becoming a reality. So many wait until they are way older to even start transition. If we had more confidence and more will power, we could achieve our most inner secret dreams.

There are many closet transsexuals in the world, living in fear of being "discovered." But if we're going to live happy lives, we must be confident in ourselves, and have the will power to push ahead, and lead the lives, that are way deep down in our souls.

Thank you Jennifer for this wonderfully delightful story. I liked it a lot.

Barbara Lynn Terry

"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."

great story loved it a lot
one thing is at first you said peter and sypnosis says peter then changes to david


keep writing as i for one will read them

I  have read all of her stories and it appears each one is better than the last one.this one also is brill and having been a ts for some time know  what this guy to female is going through.keep up the good work .

marshaxx

Hi.

I am not exactly sure about this story. much of it gives me a big smile, as it explores what I wish could have been my younger years. But in other places pushes past the reasonable.

Lucy's laying in bed at night praying to wake as a girl hit spot on for me. I remember doing that when I was that age.

I too have a big sister (5 years older than me) She though was always the typical "Dummb Blond" and I never confided in her. Although she did notice a few things over the years. Unsucsesfully removed eyeshadow etc.... I wish i and my sister could have been closer. But it was not to be.

That being one reason why I found this story hitting so close to heart.

The not so great bits...

The ending. There is in the UK a standard system for dealing with TG Kids. You might have heard of them, Mermaids.

The usual approach is to allow the kids to express themselves freely as male or female without outside influences as much as possible. Usual sugestion is to provide the child with two wardrobes. One Girls, one Boys. Then to place no preassure on the kid on which wardrobe to dress from, at least while at home or in a safe environment anyway.

Close scutiny by the egg heads and Psych brigade as your story included being involved.

At present kids are NOT allowed to enter HRT (Hormone Replacment Therapy) untill after age 16.

This is a HARD rule that is not open to alteration or negotiation. Again, there is NO way around this (At least not in the UK)

The reasoning behind these limitations is that upwards of 60% of TG kids end up changing there minds during or after puberty. The wash of hormones brings them back into line with there birth gender, or at least apparently, as I have no long term stats for those kids that change there minds and might later decide to go down the TG path.

Having said this...

I HAVE enjoyed this story. The theme of a close, loving, and Supportive sister is one that I wish I had in my life. I jsut think I would have liked it more if it had kept closer to RL.

:-)  :-)  :-)  :-)   four out of five smiles.

Natasha