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Swan Song
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Comment by Elizbeth Cathryn Mystery on 10/17/23
Looking at the story publishing dates, this does seem to be Ann's last story. Whatever you are doing:- Comment by thisisme on 06/05/13 I'm pretty sure what would happen. The women would deny any nafarious intent and simply claim to be doing what he 'secretly' wanted. The kid would never get any satisfaction short of standing center to them strapped in an explosive vest. Comment by this is me on 07/27/12 The more women these stories stack up against one guy the more unbelievable the story becomes. Yes I do believe that generally women have a bigotry against men. But I don't think that bigotry can overtake so many women so completely that they totally lose their empathy and compassion especially when it is dealing with women of relation to the guy. Comment by Stephen on 07/07/11
Comment by Silvia. on 09/15/10 I think that in a near future, he may become so angry, he can kill all their tormentors. Comment by Silvia. on 09/14/10 What a bad story you wrote! Comment by Anonymous on 11/26/09 This one is the best one that I've read so far. While most I've started, you can't stop because you want to know the ending, this one seems more realistic. The target of the petticoat punishment, isn't as lame and rebels by confronting his mom, sister, his sister's girlfriend - all in front of the audience he invited. The questions he threw at his mother were excellent, all in an attempt to find justification. I hope the continuation comes soon. Comment by Yoron on 05/23/08 This one do need an ending. Comment by juliej on 04/06/07 a sad story with a twist at thend but i felt it needed more thought to go with this story it does not go as far as to explain how it all started ths i feel needs more work all the other stories i have read are great Comment by Mandee on 12/02/06 Hi Ann, Comment by rone on 07/07/06 He has finely comfronted those that caused a major problem for him .. he did not want the change , but it was pushed on him and came to a head .... he has been destroyed and will not respect anybody again ...those he trusted and needed to help him grow , were the ones that caused him the most pain.... Comment by chrisl on 11/09/05 I think this story rails against the gender binery Male or Female. Comment by Anne on 10/19/05 Sorry: that line should have read: ". . . could form their own opinion." As Jezzi sez, "Arrrrrgh." Comment by Juliette Lima on 10/19/05 Well written and like the boy no reader can understand why they are feminizing him. They do it for the same reason a dog licks its genitals, because they can. Tyranny is always unfathomable to the free and the horrors presented are unfortunately actually effected on some in our society. A clear picture beautifully drawn of an ugly scene. Leave them wanting more that's good theater. Comment by Tina Michelle Smith on 10/17/05 To answer a question you posed, Ann, had I been Russell I would have used the Bowie knife on my captors. Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 10/17/05 First, let me say that I like what you have written and have no criticsm of what you have written. The idea of a victim (or at least Russell sees himself as a victim) confronting his victimizers is a pleasing one to me. I also can see why you are reluctant to come up with a sequel. When a number of people, myself included, begged for a sequel to "Hasty Act", you complied, then found the sequel lambasted by readers (again, myself included). My problem with this current piece is that you comment: Comment by cheryl lynn on 10/16/05 i am more worried over the "my swan song" than anything else. I enjoy your stories and I would hate to see you stop writing. just sat my assumption is all wrong. thanks Comment by Ann O'Nonymous on 10/16/05 To my Readers: Sorry, no sequel. Comment by fregen on 10/16/05 And then? A good boy is abused by his female relatives and is justifibly angry. Okay. Their reasons? We can speculate but have no insights into what they were thinking. The outcome? He accepts his fate? Refuses? Goes off the deep end? Unless there is more to come this story leaves me hanging. Comment by Early June on 10/15/05 I have liked everything tha Ann Has done. I am totally confused by this. I must have missed something. This is the first of her pieces that does not seem complete, either in concept or in execution. The style of writing even seems different, the tempo being clipped. An anger, or perhaps some other deep emotion, seems to be overcoming normal activity. Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 10/15/05 So where is the rest ?? What's the reaction? Why DID they feminize him - assuming he's telling the truth and he didn't do any of the usual things that would cause women to petticoat a boy? Arrrrggghh! Comment by Sissy Baby Paula on 10/14/05 A story very much to the point. The writer has really captured the essence of the situation and has not added any extra "lace". This story really comes forward with those feelings I sometimes get when I read forced crossdressing stories - the anger against totally unfair mothers and family. I still like those stories, but it is really nice to read another viewpoint too! |
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