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Sweet Revenge
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Comment by Ronnie on 10/10/09
So much for the macho male and how little he knows about the workings of the innards of us all. Comment by Mistress Meredith on 03/03/09 Brilliantly played -- but "Jeff" would suffer greater NOT being happy about being Gia. Gia's humiliation is a great part of the revenge and should remain so. Otherwise, nicely done, especially that fateful dinner party with Carla and Ruth tormenting Gia. Comment by Crystal on 08/05/05 The story by Karen Petties is also posted on StorySite. It is not the same as this story. I think the poster may have accessed the story by Karen Petties by mistake. They do share the same title. Comment by Cassandra on 08/05/05 Curious. This story is identical to "Sweet Revenge" by Karen Petties which can be found on the Fictionmania website. Same author? Comment by julie j on 01/02/05 ay good concept in this story of an arrogant male being taught the right way of doing things he should have read the papers first before signing away his transfer Comment by Early June on 04/24/04 Dear Jennifer White: I truly enjoy your stories. So much, I have read all of them I can find. However. your most recent stories seem to be darker. In "Sweet Revenge" the punishment so far exceeded the crimeas to render the story implausible. If Ruth was really of as evil a nature as she demonstrated in the last scene, then he did not know how very fortunate it was she broke off with him. Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 04/24/04 How does Ruth get revenge if Gia is happy being Gia and is now equal to carla and her? Or will they turn her back to him after all the surgedry? |
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